Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/774718/5ee6111873/

An old doujin that was never translated in spite of its high quality. I suspect because the raw was published in "eye-bleed" pink, but that's trivially fixed by just changing the image to greyscale. Redrawing all the "thought" text over the image was by far the more annoying part. Given how mind-numbing their job is, I suspect every halfway decent cleaner is either autistic or a masochist, and I'm not sure which applies to me. I guess that's why most translations people shit out just use a white box and say "that's all the shiteaters deserve". Honestly, I barely blame them.

As always, please post any corrections in the comments, and I'll fix them ASAP.

You did a pretty good job with this one. Kinda funny that making the raw Pink is all it took to drive translators away.

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Hey man, any chance you can find this doujin in japanese to translate?

https://e-hentai.org/g/2321599/0fa78ebc7a/

oekakikaki also has been doing more Teisou Gyakute cgs of many series if you're interested in updating your previous cg translations:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2341734/058848cdf5/

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