RAW: https://e-hentai.org/s/a8f757ca51/1477455-174
Just started learning and using new tool, so there might be weird things on technical level.

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Dude are you using machine translations? That's a real bad call.

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No, I was using new drawing program for typesetting.

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FYI there's no need to italic the text in the narration boxes. Just use a different font for them altogether.
Italics should be used for thought bubbles or in some cases, to indicate tone.

While the translation is fine in most cases but there's also weird inconsistencies throughout from mistranslations to awkward wording and just incorrect tenses.
Using page 8 as an example, when it says "I'm getting envious of you..." this is a direct continuation of the last page so it should've been "And I started becoming envious of you"

On the same page it says "This is bad... I'm getting aroused..."
but in the raw it says や やば... 勃ったきたかも which should mean "c-crap... I think I've gotten hard"

Another example is page 17 where even without comparing it to the raws you can tell that it's translated literally and disjointed.
Something like "Whoa... two of my fingers slide in a sudden..." straight up does not make sense.

Please proofread your stuff start to finish rather than page by page or even text box by box as it looks like.
Also your leading space is way too big, especially for the alternate fonts you're using.

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