Translation will continue if the new pages are sighted. lol
[Izayoi no Kiki] is only getting better and better ngl <3

source: https://e-hentai.org/g/2347208/8995f230fb/

Last edited on 12 October 2022, 13:23.

Base +4, m118w11 -26, BlueSmoke -9, Bane13 +55

btw

002
OG: もしかして♡私としたいとか思ってない？
TL: "Drink with me ♡ This will be your first time!"
ED: should be something like "Do you [maybe] wanna♡ do it with me?"

OG: どうかしら♥
TL: "What about you?"
ED: "What do you think?"

and you decided to change the text in a few bubbles for some reason

003
OG: お母さんっお母さんっ
TL: "Mom! I'm comming[sic]"
ED: "Mom! Mom!", I wouldn't nitpick this normally but idk why you also changed the next couple of bubbles

004
OG: いくぅ♥いくぅっう♥
TL: "Haaa~~~♥"
ED: "I'm cumming ♥ I'm cumminggg ♥"

OG: はぁあぁぁっ♡はぁあぁっ♡
TO: "Fhu fhu!"
ED: "Haaaah! ♡ Haaah! ♡"

002
"embarrasing"

003
"comming"

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nvm just checked your uploads and it's MTL

Last edited on 12 October 2022, 14:29.

Base +18, freehandtamashiifan +6, somerandomdude33 +19, Evyy +17, BlueSmoke +9, RichKWL +7, halomastah117 +6, incogna777 +10, 1d10t +6

@rsx205 Yeah... Saw them on DeepL while revision... Most of it didn't make any sense. Lines weren't matching with one another. but yeh i am fixing some of them. THNX buddy

Base +4, BlueSmoke -9, ciley39 +2, 1d10t -6

please label them as MTL accordingly so people can be better informed.

Base +21, suratkabar +18, freehandtamashiifan +6, somerandomdude33 +19, BlueSmoke +9, Oryx +6, ciley39 +2

这作者还活着。？？？

Base +6