This is Machine Translated so any errors probably beyond my capabilities.

at least you're honest

a few lines that stood out from a quick skim

006
OG: 店長といってもまだ若くて年齢は私よりひと回り以上も下です
TL: "The manager is still young, several years younger than me"
ED: missing a bit of detail, "Even though he's the manager, he's still young, more than twelve years younger than me"

OG: 変に警戒するのも自意識過剰よね…
TL: "It's also a bit self-conscious of me to be so cautious..."
ED: "I'm being weirdly cautious and way too self conscious, aren't I..."

016
OG: 夫が単身赴任している間だけ…
TL: "About my husband working alone"
ED: "Only while my husband is working away from home..."

023
OG: しかも毎日顔を合わせる店長に．．．
TL: "And I will see him every day."
ED: "And what's more, to the manager I see everyday..."

024
OG: もしかしてマンションの前で待ってた時から濡れてたとか？
TL: "Maybe it was wet since when you waited in front of the mansion?"
ED: FYI "mansion" means apartment here

041
OG: ううん 家よ 寝室
TL: "No, I'm in my inn bedroom"
ED: "No, I'm at home, in the bedroom"

045
OG: あぁ〜汗かいたシャワーあびてくるよ大谷さんは？
TL: "Oh, I'm sweating. I'm going to get a shower."
ED: missing a part where he asks Otani-san what she'll do. also "take a shower"

imo these corrections are worth mentioning compared to some of the other rough areas that don't matter as much. In general they might speak in phrases sometimes, but it's still understandable and not as broken as the TL makes it seem

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I unironically love how boring and average she looks! Something about that makes it so much more real 🤤

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The last page implies that this is part of a series. Is that the case?

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Oh I assumed it meant that he just been fucking old milf, and probably lying about his feeling to them just to get to their pants 🤷‍♂️

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