Please expect parts 2 and 3 sometimes in the future!

Yup, damned hot, always a good theme, mouthy little sister gets what she deserves from big bro, outstanding, thanks for all the effort and sharing :)

Base +51, deiske25952 +6, Porokichin66 +9

just fyi

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OG: 拾の姉と引き取られた義兄と3人兄弟
TL: "Has an older sister, a step-brother, and 3 brothers"
ED: her big sister is her biological sister and her big brother is a stepbrother (so together they are 3 siblings). she doesn't have 3 more brothers

since you used resampled images again I assume you're still google translating like your last upload?

Base +18, White Joker +27, Vivi1993 +21, Gentleman Chimera +8

plot summary

HENTAILAND HYPNOTIC CHALLENGE WENT WRONG (GOT REAL) (GONE SEXUAL)

RAW:https://e-hentai.org/g/1552418/e892abbf0b/

Base +36, as102 +13, Ashvinoth +7

@rsx205 Yeah I was hoping that wasn't what that line meant, but unfortunately I don't actually know any Japanese, and I do try to make it clear that all of my translations rely on Google translate, thanks for the corrections!

@Larequirem I tried to find the Japanese raws here, but only found the Chinese translations, is there a reason I can't see anything when I open that link, is it something on my end?

Base +1

I've gone through a few pages, and while the JP dialogue is simple and straightforward, you clearly did more than just Google Translate > slap output on page. Not bad.

MTL however can only get you so far, so recommend using dictionaries (ex: Jisho) and grammar databanks (ex: Bunpro has a pretty decent collection) for stuff you're stuck on.

Also, stop resampling, it's very annoying.

Editing guides:

General resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials

edit: some extras

Last edited on 15 October 2022, 20:49.

Base +18, White Joker +27, Gentleman Chimera +8, Osgon +8, as102 +13, Raj8 +8, Ashvinoth +7, Aelth +7

@cutegyaru Could you explain what you mean by resampling?

Base +1