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[clover] Elf ga Joou-sama! Ch. 1 | That Elf is My Queen! Ch. 1 Vol.1 [English] [Digital] [The Crimson Star TL]

[clover] エルフが女王様!第6話1 [英訳] [DL版].

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Posted:2022-10-19 23:55
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Language:English  TR
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Posted on 19 October 2022, 23:55 by:   Kepabra    PM
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I'm gonna translate the entire volume, it's gonna take a while, but I will see it done.

Pd: Does this count as a "Non-Hentai", or a "Doujinshi"? --> Thanks Kobalt
Posted on 19 October 2022, 16:25 by:   Kobalt    PM
Score +40
It's never Non-H if there's nudity.
Posted on 19 October 2022, 17:46 by:   hachimu    PM
Score +30
you're gonna translate the entire volume?

kepabra-sama... I kneel.

just a little thing : the alternate font for the elf queen is a bit hard to read ^^'
Posted on 19 October 2022, 17:52 by:   dragonknight5    PM
Score +6
looking forward to it
Posted on 19 October 2022, 19:12 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +81
You need to proofread.

p.25

i didn't knew > know
your behavior, in my world is interpreted a red flag > Your behavior would be interpreted as a red flag in my world.
doesn't it tickles you > tickle

p.26

did it felt > feel

p.27

human's > humans

p.28

what does that means > mean
does it means > mean

p.29

70 billions > 7 billion

p.30

especially the males ones > male ones
i did mistreated > mistreat


Two nitpicks: don't use vertical ellipses, it really doesn't make sense in English. Also, quoting using brackets is a Japanese thing. If you wanna put emphasis on a word, you can simply bold/italicize it.

edit: thanks. I don't access to the raws, but does it really say 70 billion? and not 7? How far in the future is this?
edit2: rough grammar should be downvoted now.
Last edited on 20 October 2022, 06:26.
Posted on 19 October 2022, 22:38 by:   Kepabra    PM
Score +56
Thank you @cutegyaru for pointing out the errors, I've done the corrections.
I'll put special effort into proofreading in the following chapters. Sorry.
edit: You're absolutely right, the raws say "70億", but I just found out that it actually says 7 billion, and the 億 adds a 0 to the number. Its fixed.
Last edited on 21 October 2022, 01:25.
Posted on 19 October 2022, 23:07 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +104
it should be 7 billion (70億) based on https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/98774703 or https://www.sunday-webry.com/episode/3269754496551508990
Posted on 20 October 2022, 13:27 by:   darkreaderz    PM
Score +13
@kepabra it's commerical non-h, aka an all-ages manga magazine.
Technically forbidden to be uploaded to e-h (which is why it's all expunged, or sometimes outright deleted)
I think that applies to translations too, but not sure on that. That said, don't be surprised if this upload gets flagged, although it won't be of my doing since I don't care enough to do so.

In the event of if it were allowed, non-h supersedes most other categories, and even if it werent non-h then it would count as a manga under all counts, as it was first published in a n-h commerical magazine, and tankobons (even that of doujinshi) generally get classified as manga on e-h.

the info on https://ehwiki.org/wiki/Gallery_Categories is rather vague as to whether this is non-h or not.
I generally go by whether the work or host magazine has a R18 label, not whatever subjectiveness the readers decide, such as nudity or the reader's horniness. Some all-age magazines are fine with anything that isnt showing pussy or dicks, yes even nipples or light rays sex are fine today until the next lewd crackdown, but again, whether this applies to e-h is eh.... shrugs
just cause a work features copious amounts of fanservice or is drawn by ex-doujinshikas doesnt really make it r18, but again shrugs........
Posted on 20 October 2022, 19:20 by:   Words and Thoughts    PM
Score +14
very nice to see this translated, thank you :)
Posted on 05 November 2022, 01:07 by:   Kepabra    PM
Score +6
I got concerned of what @darkreaderz said about this gallery and the next ones getting flagged in the future, for that reason I have started to upload them on Mangadex as well, there you can also check the updates chapter by chapter. Thanks @darkreaderz for giving me info about this stuff.

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