I think you should remove the text first then paste new texts...

raw:https://e-hentai.org/g/1022708/7feb7a809f/

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for rough tl tag

004
OG: ふーんクエストもあるのね！
TL: "Hmm, there's also a quest!"
ED: safe to say there are multiple quests even from context alone

OG: この辺の敵は歯ごたえなかったからちょっとレベル高いのやってみようかな
TL: "The enemies around here were tough..."
ED: she's saying they were NOT tough so she wants to do something higher level

005
OG: よお、やる気満々だな…後悔しても知らないぜぇ
TL: "Yo, I'm full of motivation...I don't know if I regret it"
ED: he's saying that she's full of motivation and he doesn't care if she'll regret this

006
OG: お嬢ちゃんが俺たちの仲間をやったんだろ？
TL: "Didn't the young lady join us?"
ED: he's asking if she's the girl that did their other companions in

OG: そのお礼をたっぷりしてやるよ…
TL: "I'll give you plenty of thanks..."
ED: kind of awkward TL..."payback" is probably a natural way to look at it

OG: そういう敗北イベントみたいなものだろうけど…
TL: "I got defeated just like that..."
ED: she's assuming this battle is a scripted loss

009
OG: じゃあ…次はこれをしゃぶってくれや
TL: "Do this one next!"
ED: "suck", more specifically

OG: ヨハネは絶対そんなことっ
TL: "Yohane never said that!"
ED: she would never DO anything like that

OG: おらッ暴れんなッ！
TL: Stop being such a pussy!
ED: idk maybe this is a nitpick but they're telling her to stop struggling

010
OG: 乱暴にされたくなかったらな！
TL: "If only you didn't just attack us out of the blue"
ED: he's threatening her with more violence after telling her not to resist in the prev panel

OG: はぁっ善子ちゃんの口ま○こ最高だぜ…もう出そうだ…！
TL: "Yoshiko-chan's pussy is the best...it's about to come out...!"
ED: "mouth pussy" specifically, and "I'm about to cum" is probably more natural sounding

011
OG: すごく苦しいしにがい…
TL: "It hurts and it stinks!"
ED: painful and bitter

OG: こんなとこまで再現しなくても…！
TL: "Even if you don't reproduce it to this extent...!"
ED: she's saying they didn't have to replicate this part of the experience

OG: まさかスクールアイドルとやれるなんてもう我慢できねぇ…！
TL: "It feels so good fucking a school idol!"
ED: the guy speaking hasn't done anything yet, he's speaking in anticipation

OG: ち○こが滑っちまうなぁ
TL: "It's spilling..."
ED: he's saying his dick is slipping/sliding

OG: お嬢ちゃんの処女ま○こを / 野蛮なち○こで開通してやるぜ…
TL: "She's a virgin" / "I'll take her first time myself"
ED: he's saying he'll open up her virgin pussy with his savage cock

014
OG: はあっはぁっもうイキそうだ…大人気スクールアイドルに中出しだッ…！
TL: "It looks like it's going to be hot...I'm going to have a creampie for a very popular school idol"
ED: in the first part he's just panting and then saying he's gonna cum. is this MTLed?

015
OG: ゲームの中でされただけなのに / 本当に中に出されたみたいに奥があつくて痺れてる…
TL: "It just happened in the game" / "It's so deep and numb as if it was really taken out..."
ED: she's saying even though she got fucked in game, she feels hot and tingly inside like she really got creampied

017
OG: まあ最後のは臨場感も何も本当の感覚だけどね
TL: "Well, the last one has a sense of realism and nothing but a real feeling"
ED: he's saying rather than a sense of realism, it's just the actual real deal

OG: でも、もっと欲しいっておま○こヒクついてるよ？
TL: "But you want more, are you scared?"
ED: he's pointing out that her pussy is twitching because she wants more

023
OG: 素直に自分から跨るなんて
TL: "It's up to you if you wanna go on"
ED: he can't believe she's straddling him on her own

oh it looks like you're using resampled images too

Last edited on 11 November 2022, 11:09.

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this feels like a shitty machine TL plugged into yandex and then screenshotted

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doing this kind of blasphemy in the already rare Yohane doujinshi?
i hope you rot in hell for all eternity

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