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It’s translated from Chinese to English!
Translation by Maddeo and typeset by Mylloux Delusion!

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Chinese version at https://e-hentai.org/g/1737113/1d5b7f642d/

>Musashi fears of getting pregnant
>Ritsuka’s affirms he’ll take responsibility
>Musashi begs him to impregnate her
>gets nakadashi’d dozens of times
>no pregnant Musashi in the end
You had one job.
Good doujin, otherwise.

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Mash saying "no bloody way" should be a crime, along with the level of English here because it's terrible.
Did no one proofread this or what?

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rough grammar

p.2 are we really getting into the room > going
p.2 didn't we already talked > talk
p.2 i've already made preparation > preparations
p.3 i wish to keep a memory of your last moments while still being in your swimwear > the way it's worded makes it sound like he's in HER swimsuit, which is not the case
p.3 you have my words > word
p.4 i thought it's gonna be > it would be
p.4 never in a million year would I think we will be playing > never in a million years did I think we'd be playing
p.4 can't take this anymore > I can't
p.7 that's huge > i would usually not make a fuss on differences between this/that/it, but the dick is literally 3 cm away from her face. Clearly "it" or "this" are the only options here.
p.7 fuckin > fuckin'
p.8 wait up > this isn't the right expression. "Hold on" or just "wait"
p.8 if you suck on it like that... cumming > If you suck on it like this, then I'm gonna... cum!
p.9 overfill > overflow
p.10 didn't know you've gotten so wet, huh? don't tell me > this is confusing. who didn't know? Him? Her? Why is it worded as a question?
p.11 i wish we can take this slowly, please? > can we take this slow, please?
p.11 you're so cute when saying that > when you say that

etc

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I'd rather not know this book exists than read it like this.
Fuck the Chinese users who keep hoarding raws offline.

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@b51de @cutegyaru

Boo fucking hoo. Keep blaming your boogeymen lol. Buy the damn book and translate it. Fucking racist piece of shits.

Last edited on 03 December 2022, 00:38.

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