Translation and editing done by me, Nikorasuuuu (again). Since I managed to get my hands on the original japanese scan of this doujin, I decided to give it a try. As the current english translation was very dated (probably dating from around 2008-9) and badly done, I've done a completely new translation based on japanese text, both in english and also in portuguese.

Have in mind that as this scan is around 15 years old, the raw quality may not be that good. I've done what I could.
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I like this artstyle, very 80s/90s

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I think the doujin dates from 1999, around that time.

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can't comment on the TL since I don't know where to find the raws, but there's some weird grammar. I can provide better suggestions if I can compare with the raw

002
"Fast, go and find spare bodies!"

003
"So, when our physical hosts die, we need to find a new one, as we cannot survive in that way."
"However, those three, that are from the same race as me, probably have also taken new bodies on here."

005
"What did just happen"
"It hurted like I was going to die"

006
"You saved my life and seems like a good person, so I'll trust you."

008
"This form puts me in disadvantage..."

011
"So filled..."
"We're not over yet with you!"

013
"I've heard that it feels good taking it up on the rectum!"

016
"So let me take you to heaven before I end with your life!"

019
"If you keep like this your body will break!"

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Alt ENG Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/129958/cf9fe9dd43/

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Is the actually more or is all that is available?

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Wow this is great! Wonderful work to bring it to the surface with a fresh translation.

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Beautiful. I miss this style so much. I don't know if it will come back into vogue, but I sure hope it does.

Thank you for uploading.

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Ow, my age is hurting.

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@smokingsnake Can you post the original Japanese version, too? It's not on here.

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