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You gotta fix how you draw butts somehow

Here's what I'll say. The butt on the cover and the butts on page 5, they both look great

But the butt on page 2 looks bad, page 3 looks worse, and page 4 looks absolutely terrible.

It's not enough to just have a big butt they have to actually blend in with the bodies, is the best way I can explain it?

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Not trying to turn the comments into 'art review' but I think you would benefit greatly if you worked on perspective and got away from the pen tool. e.g. - page 3 - the woman's breasts are a single curved line. If you flip your images horizontally while you're working you can see perspective issues - for instance the head on the cover doesn't work in relation to the body.

Apologies for unsolicited advice; it looks like you're putting time into your work, I think a couple changes would make a difference.

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Fuck, thats the worst drawn ass ive ever seen. I created an account just to tell you that.

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Can we get a sequel to "Being a Good Friend," please? I made an account just to say that. :P

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I love his teats.

@ffg: "created an account"
your base+6 said otherwise. Lying while insulting tsk tsk, you are on my hitlist now but thats probably your spam account

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