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Your darks need work: the background and foreground elements tend to blend together into an indistinguishable mush. Take page 9 for example: way too much white space in the background of the bottom and top right panels. They’d look much better if either (a) you digitally replaced the background with some sort of screen tone or gradient, or (b) makes your pen strokes much tighter (closer in parallel with one another) to give a stronger illusion of tone.

This is a great video for explaining what I just explained but better:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=O61NED7VZIc
Also look up Alphonso Dunn on YouTube.

Keep at it and thanks for posting!

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Maybe have someone read over your english its reads really unnatural.

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