oh my god he's raping me i better don't do anything - nagatoro-san

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Has to be one of the most retarded netorare plots I have ever had the displeasure of reading.

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Hilarious, I love it when they play themselves like this, always hilarious.

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only looked at the first two few pages but this is looking like a rough tl
I assume you're trying to retranslate the Chinese translation since you left Chinese text in here
but even then you're not TLing properly since the CN raws look more accurate to me than what you came up with

I ignored wrong interjections/sfx from these edits in favor of some bigger mistakes

001
OG: だから卒業まで目立たず大人しく過ごすつもりだ
TL: "Until that time, I haven't planned to meet that demon with a bright eye"
ED: along the lines of "that's why I'm gonna keep a low profile until graduation"

OG: 女の子はいつだって全力
TL: "It's this girl again"
ED: along the lines of "Girls always go all out/give it their all!" but anyway this could change depending on the rest of the story if I end up finishing it

002
OG: あたたたってるっ！むむむむむむねっ！！
TL: "Boobs boobs boobs..."
ED: he's stammering about her breasts touching him but idk if "boobs boobs boobs" is what I would settle on

OG: どもりすぎで何言ってるか分かんないですよ？先輩（笑）
TL: "Say, don't you fell[sic] anything?"
ED: she's teasing him and saying she doesn't understand since he's stuttering so much

OG: 通学路のど真ん中で / こんなっ…！
TL: "She always.. / ..does this kind of thing"
ED: missing detail about it being on the way to school

OG: どうしたんですか？ / だ だから！！
TL: "You like me?" / "Go away..."
ED: she's asking "what's wrong" and he's avoiding a direct answer

003
OG: だけどもっと面白い反応が見たいなぁ
TL: "It's really interesting, but this reaction..."
ED: "But I want to see a more interesting reaction"

OG: そんでよぉその男が好きだった女を
TL: "That man clearly favorites woman!"
ED: he's in the middle of telling a story to his buddy "And when I introduced him to his crush..."

OG: 俺の女っつって紹介したらビービー泣き出してよ
TL: "If she would be my girlfriend, I wouldn't waste her."
ED: "I called her my woman and he started crying"

OG: マジ受けるわ
TL: "I can't stand such people"
ED: he's saying it's hilarious

004
OG: こんな人気のない場所で改まって話ってなんなんだろう…
TL: "What does she want? There is no one here"
ED: he's wondering why they need to have such a formal conversation in an empty location

OG: も もしかして告白…！？
TL: "Could it be..."
ED: missing a huge detail about him thinking it's a confession

OG: そうだったらハッキリと断ってギャフンって言わせてやる！！
TL: "Me rejecting her, couldn't stop her?"
ED: he's planning to reject her if it really is a confession

OG: こいつは1年の…
TL: "This guy? He is first grade."
ED: first grade isn't the same as first year

005
OG: こちら私の彼氏の藤堂くんです！！
TL: "This is my boyfriend, Fujido-kun"
ED: his name is Toudou, it's even spelled out in the raw

OG: …だろっ
TL: "boyfriend?"
ED: this is him muttering part of his next line. you can pick what to put here depending on how you change his next line

006
OG: 言わなくても良いだろ！そんな事！！
TL: "Don't joke about this kind of thing!"
ED: he's saying she didn't have to tell him

OG: わざわざ呼び出して伝える事が彼氏って…なんだよそれ…
TL: "What does it mean, you have a boyfriend and call me out here?"
ED: he's just exasperated like "You brought me out here specifically to tell me about your boyfriend...what the hell..."

OG: あのー先輩実はですね…
TL: "Senpai! So did you really think..."
ED: she's starting to reveal something, like "Um Senpai...you know, actually..."

008
OG: 峯岸
TL: "That's..."
ED: wrong speaker. this is the senpai speaking her name "Minegishi??"

OG: なんでお前が泣きそうな顔してんだよ…
TL: "I can't allow myself to cry"
ED: wrong speaker. "Why do you look like you're gonna cry..." (this is the senpai's thoughts)

011
OG: わりぃな先輩
TL: "Don't you unterstand[sic], senpai?"
ED: he's being sarcastically apologetic

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002
"alawys"
"don't you fell anything"

003
"That man clearly favorites woman!"

011
"unterstand"

Last edited on 13 December 2022, 19:34.

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well mc should just ignore her + she would probably stop bothering him , because she will be busy with the chad lmao

Base +6, PUNHETEIR0 +6, ADIN0 +5

Wyf is that? This bitch retarded as fuck. Now senpai should ignore her. Wtf she want his atention be fuckin with another guy? Damn this stupid on another lvl how this bitch with her Brain even save her V card until now. In this world ugly bastard not exsist? Cuz girl like her probably should be victim for ugly bastard for long time ago.

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Am I supposed to feel bad for this guy?

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I think I actually would like to see a sequel to this. How is this suppose to play out now? XD

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well that went from 0 to 100 real fast, no foreplay at all

Base +6, ADIN0 +5

What the fuck was even the plan here? This feels AI generated

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So what was the grand master plan? Cause, I fail to see the point of it.

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This is basically that Freedom Prophet story only dumber, which I didn't think was possible.

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This is beyond retarded

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Oh no I love her but i'm a sigma male to tell her that better be playing try hard to get

Oh no he's kinda love me and I kinda love him better teasing him with showing him fake boyfriend

Oh no he really like me- wait what are you doing !? No don't rape me in front of senpai (Procreed to climax)

Oh no I really like her and let her being rape to finished while getting boner.

END.

(I literally have no idea what the story it's about cause it MTL translate but the story might be about this)

Last edited on 14 December 2022, 08:10.

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This plot's stupidity knows no bounds. Amazing.

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If at least the guy with the glasses planned something like that at the beginning, it will be a bonus. Too bad it wasn't like that.

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It feels like there's something missing. Even for netorare this is kinds stupid.

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