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I'm sort of confused as to what exactly is going on with the brother and sister, their dialog at the end kind of strange and doesn't make much sense to me. Does anyone else know whats going on?

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you know i always wonder why garbage like this gets a high review score.

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Another story of a guy finding out the girl he likes has been stolen away and turned into a sex-crazed bitch. <sigh>. Must the male lead ALWAYS sorrowfully accept this turn of events? Can't he just ONCE get angry, kick some ass, fuck the weak-minded bitch senseless and then move on with his life? Because this degree of pathetic gets on my nerves after five or six stories...

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The art is good, but I agree with both vampa and face1355. I don't know if it is the translator who didn't do a great job, or just the story to be incomplete, and I'm also getting sick of bad-ending stories. You know that the girl you love is a nympho and she also loves you? Then go fuck her till her brain explodes, or something! BTW at page 25 it seems that the purpouse of those two brothers were to get Nozomu and Haruka together. Strange way they choose...

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Great art and great story. NTR might not be for everyone, but the point is exactly to piss you off, I think. This one is nice, and the ending isn't even that bad, all considered. Although I'll agree with the others, the last talk between brother & sister is a bit confusing.

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Should it have a continuation or stay like a oneshot?
Well inside the art of Netorare, this must be an oneshot, but well, you know, like you I want to know what`s next?

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Well NTR is for the most part intended to inspire jealousy in the reader, so it's sort of a genre convention for such stories to have a bad end, kind of like how it's exceedingly rare to find a romantic comedy where the main characters don't get together.

However, Hanahira Seitokaichou by inomaru (hasn't been translated, but the story's easy enough to follow) which can be found here https://e-hentai.org/g/212110/7f0941532f/ and the last chapter here: https://e-hentai.org/g/222547/b2ecb20c27/ has both a happy ending and a much more competent and cool hero so those of you complaining might like this better.

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Wgat I dont understand is she said she loves him at the end. Well, she was crying at least , so she might regret something. If she does, serves her right I guess.

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ah, NTR, where manga gets a dose of reality, killing one boner to the other, even so its still fappable

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i see others works of this author and are pretty good ... BUT ... WHEN THE NTR TAG is there ... is seriusly turned off and said "what wasted of talent -_____-" (yeah! i'm of those who like nice ending) .... well for this i'm agree whit face1355 and i do the same ... even ... if this happen to me ... seriously i will kick ass and kill like a beast while punching and hitting very bad .... well ... my gf likes hentai too and draw as me ... one day (long time before she become my girlfriend) send me a pic (maybe that was become her triumph card if you think that) who one of her friend (and she was called him "oni-san") do for her ... and seriously ... i was rage up at this seriously who said her if i can punch this guy ... she told me: "he isn't of this country ... he if from Mexico .. but don't worry ... this time he start to being so annoying whit me ... you know ... you're only for me" ... well ... that time i still looking for other friend and my actual gf was still looking for me since she told me whit some tears she will wait me and cheer me up always ... but whiout success .. then i decide to do it since that pic still revolving into my mind too (YEAH ... the same fucking experiencie at this) ... then ... well we have a last time togheter she said me her only wish ... give her the opportunity to become her bf ... well after that i accept whiout regret ... maybe because she do everything for make look at her ... after a week ... i talk whit her again (she told me before become my gf she likes hentai too ... even my draw style ... well ... some ppl here or in DA know me as Raisen-kun n_&ntilde; ...) about somethings ... she told me she like to talk about this but was a bit shy only whit me ... as i be the same whit her ... but i decide to broke the ice and told her .. is not a shame if we tell us the things who we like it ... even the things who we don't like it ... after so much coincidence we engage to talk about dislikes ... and i told her: guro, bdsm and sado , tentacle rape , rape and .... yes .... NTR ... she ask me who is that ... and i told her ... she put a very asheme face when i told this ... then ... she said me .. "you're not anger right???" .... and i said her:"if is for your talking about that pic from your "oni-san" well ... that thing was stabed in my mind for a month ..." ... after that she told me ... "is my fault ... i give him the yes for do it the pic .. but i don't expected you will feel like this (in that part she drop tears while said that) ... even if is not real ... that thing was stabed in your mind and i can't do anything for relieve this ... " ... the pic was his "oni-san" and her doing sex in doggy style ... then ... she talk me about her "oni-san" propoused her being her gf via internet ... but she refuse because ... she still love me ... and was happen the same day who the gf of this dude broke her ... and some friend of him scold him for that ... even told him to behave more mature for do hentai pics like this (i think he do more fucking others charactes for others authors or real ppl cause the dissgust of them or some other ppl .... even ... i still know other ppl who do the same) ... well the thing is ... i told her everything who dislike and she said me that was correct and aggre ... and if i can forgive her for show me that draw ... even if isn't real ... but still be NTR impisited for me or she (PD: when she send me that was via MSN before talk whit her in person) ... it's funny that when i still think why she told me a ...you know ... thing of: "but the draw doesn't compared if we do that in real" in my ear ... i was blushing and sorpriced like a hell for this XD ... well the rest is personal now ... we have 2 month now since become couple and i'm really happy now ... even ... she told me to do specials draws for her whit huge boobs like do in my female OCs (i'm oppai artist) and someH scenes ... and if her oni-san or even other attempt to do something she will cut they nuts off or even she let me rip them like a hell ...

and if someone like ... join me in the campain to said: "NO AND ELIMINATED THE NTR or even Prohibited that"

my name is Benjamin and Ppl who know as an artist call me Raisen

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If you like this one, check out "Long Sweltering Night" by Harusawa https://e-hentai.org/g/566360/12f52ca992/

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one if those Mangas you MUST NOT END. THE SOLE HEARTS OF US ALL ARE DEPENDING ON IT. YOU CAN MAKE IT RIGHT. YOU CAN DO JUSTICE!!! WE BELIVE IN YOU IPPON XD

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What a fucking whore, giving into him like that. At least Nozomu didn't have any choice but to be fucked.

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Stupid girl (both).

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