RAW:
https://e-hentai.org/s/f934726123/150014-31

Base +5

you erased a bunch of text outside of the bubbles so I assume that's why it's tagged as a redraw?

like on page 2
OG: ノックしろって言ったでしょーがっ！！
TL: N/A
ED: "I told you to knock!!"

003
OG: なんでそんなキャピキャピした装備を…？
TL: "Why are you wearing such capacious equipment...?"
ED: the gist is that her getup makes her seem spunky. did you just MTL this to get "capacious"?

Base +21, funk_u_up +13