002
OG: 什麼人？
TL: What people?
ED: "Who's there?"

004
OG: 要不是你們這些貴族的圧迫！
TL: "If it weren't for the oppression of your nobles!""
ED: no aristocrats are being oppressed, he's blaming their conditions on the aristocrats oppressing them

005
OG: 放鬆警惕了！就是現在！
TL: "Let your guard down now!"
ED: these are separate statements, one about her letting her guard down, and one giving his companions a signal

006
OG: 糟了！是迷煙！
TL: "Oh no! It's smoke!"
ED: 迷煙 in context should be a type of sleeping gas/chloroform/psychedelic etc, and "smoke" doesn't have that same connotation

008
OG: 唔...
TL: "Well"
ED: this is her groaning as she wakes up

OG: 單純的浪花騎士，我們就是匪盜。
TL: "The mere knight of the waves, we are the bandits."
ED: spindrift knight according to the localization

010
OG: 唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔唔
TL: "Thames, Thames, Thames, Thames, Thames, Thames, Thames, Thames, Thames, Thames, Thames, Thames, Thames"
ED: these are muffled cries

OG: 好了好了，浪花騎士肯定已經玩膩了。
TL: "Well, well, the wave rider must have gotten tired of playing"
ED: "Alright, that's enough, the spindrift knight must be tired of playing" is more accurate because he's telling his buddy to stop, and then the rest is his speculation

011
OG: 唔—不—
TL: "Industry"
ED: muffled cry followed by negative exclamation

OG: 唔嗯嗯嗯嗯嗯嗯嗯嗯哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦哦
TL: "...................................."
ED: muffled cries

012
OG: 要壞掉了啊啊啊！
TL: "To break down ah ah ah!"
ED: "I'm gonna break"

OG: 真是下賤死了阿！
TL: "It's really cheap!"
ED: "So depraved"

021
OG: 進...進來了！
TL: Enter...in!
ED: it's not an imperative, it's just past tense

027
OG: 刻晴，你記得去迎接一下。
TL: "Carved clear, you remember to go meet"
ED: along the lines of "Keqing, make sure you say hello"

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