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Absolutely terrible.

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1. Wrong resolution. You downloaded the 1280x downsized version of the images. Originals are at 2125 x 3023. Download the archive or the non-downsized torrent (right side.)
2. I'll be honest, your typesetting needs work. Why do you have GIGANTIC spaces between every line of dialogue?
3. Some mistakes. Btw, hyphens happen BEFORE, not after.

Happen-
ing

and not

Happen
-ing

every page: what are periods and commas?

p.2 in Shenhe story quest > Shenhe's
p.6 i knew it's massive > they're (referring to breasts)
p.6 afterall > after all
p.7 everyday > every day
p.7 You're basically just asking people to rape you walking with them around dressing like that >"You're basically just asking for people to rape you walking around dressed like that."
p.11 a provoking body tights > cut "a"
p.11 afterall > after all
p.16 because she'll my personal sex slave now > she'll be

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it needs fix?

Edit: Will fix it

Last edited on 08 January 2023, 04:05.

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