Few minor mistakes Page 3: 'What's the hell is going on' -> 'What the hell is going on' or 'What the hell's going on' Page 6: 'First would be inhaling senpai musk' -> 'First would be inhaling senpai's musk' I also feel compelled to mention the use of 'kinda' on page 12 but I don't know if that's intentional or not.