Hello everyone, I hope you are well.

This is the first doujinshi I translate into English. I hope you like it.

You can follow the artist in his networks:

Twitter: https://twitter.com/island_kossori

Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/169968

Or, you can support him in his FANBOX: https://island.fanbox.cc/

For Spanish-speaking people, the spanish translation of the doujinshi will be released in a few days.

POSDATA: I am grateful for the corrections and your recommendations on the various points where I have presented deficiencies.
I also thank the English-speaking community for tolerating my first attempt at translation into English. I really apologize if I have generated some discomfort to any experienced translator.
I must admit that the process of elaborating my translation was somewhat rushed.

For now and from now on, I will limit myself to remove censorship from upcoming doujinshis that will be made by this artist.
As well as only translating these into my native language (spanish).

As mentioned by user "decidua", I hope that the translations that will come out of this doujinshi will be better than mine. It would be best for everyone.
I have no problem with that.

Last edited on 13 January 2023, 20:18.

Base +5, greendragon24 -7, WildCrow +13, Coledas Ukgent +4, Geosage -10

fyi

003
OG: 可愛すぎてちんこの勃起やばすぎ（笑）
TL: "I can't wait to get my dick in there"
ED: he's saying he's hard af because of how cute she looks (directly related to next bubble)

OG: そういうのいいから早くやれって後がつかえてんだよ（笑）
TL: "I've been waiting all day for this, haha."
ED: he's telling the other guy to get on with it (based on what's said in the prev bubble). and then he says that people after him are waiting

OG: おいおい流石に早すぎんだろ…
TL: "Damn it. It seems that I came very quickly...haha."
ED: wrong speaker

004
OG: しかしホント全然起きないもんなんですね♥
TL: "This is not something that happens all the time, is it? ♥"
ED: he's commenting on how she didn't wake up at all

OG: 膣内出しまでしても大丈夫なんて♪
TL: "I can't believe fucking a girl's pussy feels so good"
ED: he's saying he can't believe that it's ok for them to cum inside her

OG: ラフコフを潰したときにメンバーから聞き出した特製の睡眠プレイだからな（笑）
TL: "This is a special kind of 'sleep-play' that we learned recently, haha."
ED: missing detail, they learned it from a member of Laughing Coffin after crushing them

005
OG: もしかして俺たちみんなアイツと穴兄弟ってことに…
TL: "I think, that in the end, maybe we are all 'lone wolves' just like him."
ED: he's wondering if they're all eskimo bros

OG: いやいやまだ大丈夫だろ
TL: "That is not true. We are not like him."
ED: he's saying they're fine/in the clear (because of what's in the next bubble)

OG: アスナ様に告って姦っちまうなんてことよっぽどのことないと絶対無理
TL: "I'd have to be crazy to date Asuna-sama just only to fuck with her."
ED: he's saying it's impossible to date her without violating her

OG: ヤリまくったせいで感度レベル上がりまくり
TL: "I've been doing it so much that my sensitivity level has increased."
ED: they're talking about her, given the next page

006
OG: めっちゃおまんこ締まってる♪
TL: "Her mouth feels so good and so warm. ♥"
ED: he's saying her pussy's tight af

OG: これなら黒づくめの童貞野郎でも簡単にイかせられるんじゃないすか
TL: "Hey dude. I'm sure this would make the virgin 'boy in black' cum easily."
ED: they're saying even the "virgin 'boy in black'" would make her cum easily

OG: じゃあせいぜい俺たちに感謝してもらわんと
TL: "If that is the case, we should consider ourselves lucky. Haha."
ED: they're saying he'd have to thank them a lot then

007
OG: みんなのオナホ
TL: "Personal sex toy"
ED: communal sex toy, kind of the opposite of "personal"

OG: 正正下
TL: "Fair use for all"
ED: these are tally marks

Base +22, Sofa King +6, Kacywang +6, Coledas Ukgent +4, orasmase +8

Homie, I appreciate you decensoring this but your translation seems quite off... If you're using MTL it's okay for me but please be honest & upfront with it rather than needing to be called out and possibly get dunked on by others even more.

I'm halfway finished with the editing so mine should be up tonight or tomorrow.

P3
可愛すぎてちんこの勃起やばすぎ(笑)
Yours: I can't wait to get my dick in there.
Actual: Man, she's so cute my dick has gotten rock hard. (Lol)

そういうのいいから早くやれって後がつかえてんだよ(笑)
Yours: I've been waiting all day for this, haha.
Actual: Yeah, we get it already. Just get to it or else we'll be stuck behind you. (Pfft).

おいおい流石に早すぎんだろ…(笑)
Yours: Damn it. It seems that I came very quickly...
Actual: Oi, oi, come on. That's way too quick.
(The new guy's way of speaking is different, that's how you know which speech bubble it belongs to)

P4
しかしホント全然起きないもんなんですね!
Yours: This is not something that happens all the time, is it?
Actual: But she really doesn't wake up at all (after all of this)!

膣内出しまでしても大丈夫なんて♪
Yours: I can't believe fucking a girl's pussy feels so good.
Actual: And it's fine to cum inside her, right? ♪

ラフコフを潰したときにメンバーから聞き出した特製の睡眠プレイだからな(笑)
Yours: This is a special kind of "sleep-play" that we learned recently, haha.
Actual: It's a special sleeping play/concoction/glitch that I eked out of Laughing Coffin's members back when we went to crush them out. Heh.

P5
もしかして俺たちみんなアイツと穴兄弟ってことに
Yours: I think that, in the end, maybe we are all "lone wolves" just like him.
Actual: Hell, maybe we're all sharing the same meathole/pussy as him... ##literally 'Hole brothers'

いやいやまだ大丈夫だろ
Yours: That is not true. We are not like him.
Actual: Nah, no way they have done it yet.

だってアイツ…
Yours: I mean...
Actual: Cause that guy...

最近の記録は6人目だったのに一気に更新したぞ♪
Yours: My record was to have cum in her 6 times in a row, but you simply beat it.
Actual: The last record was 6 people (#who came inside her#), but we've broken it in a jiffy.

P6
めっちゃお〇んこ締まってる♪
Yours: Her mouth feels so good and warm
Actual: Damn, her pussy is really tight ♪

じゃあせいぜい俺たちに感謝してもらわんと(笑)
Yours: If that is the case, we should consider ourselves lucky. Haha.
Actual: Then, he should really thank us all a lot. (Lmao) (#for making her pussy so tight & good#)

P7
みんなのオナホ
Yours: Personal sex toy
Actual: Onahole for everyone

正正
Yours: Fair use for all
Actual: (#These are just tally marks to count how many times they've cum inside her#)

Base +11, Bwaly -6, Sofa King +6, Kacywang +6, Coledas Ukgent +4, Evyy +17, Vivi1993 +21, orasmase +8

Ironically, if the 2 comments above are right, the attempt at 'translation' of this guy seem to only really better justify 'NTR' tag over just the 'Rape' one. The actual context of the plot implies they're raping Asuna without her knowledge by using a special drug while this translation almost seems to vaguely imply she consented to it with the whole thing about the Laughing Coffin drug being replaced with 'sleep play', lol.

Last edited on 13 January 2023, 18:41.

Base +10, Sofa King +6, Vormik +7, Coledas Ukgent -4

ok i really don't get some where they are sleaping... i mean she is holding dicks with her hands! I guess they could have put there dicks in her hands but thats obviusly very silly. Or is it supposed to be a subcounsius thing? I guess she could also be fully consius and she just wants to get fucked. Some indication about what the fuck is going on would be nice.

Base +5, Vormik -7, Coledas Ukgent -4, Geosage -10, Bwaly +6