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[Yolki Palki (Rororogi Mogera)] Toile no Jimiko to Omukae no Gokusotsu [English] [Painful Nightz]

[ヨールキ・パールキ (露々々木もげら)] トイレの地味子とお迎えの獄卒 [英訳]

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Posted:2023-01-15 06:46
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Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:122.9 MiB
Length:39 pages
Favorited:1486 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.46

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Posted on 15 January 2023, 06:50 by:   bigbro000    PM
Score +45
Thank you so much for translating this one!
Posted on 15 January 2023, 06:52 by:   OnceForAll    PM
Score +65
Posted on 15 January 2023, 06:53 by:   Waitugreat    PM
Score +129
Oh wow the last page:

[Warning] The producer of this work does not permit
• reproduction of the work
• blablabla ...
• I am especially disgusted by the act of translating and reprinting without permission. We will take action as soon we find them.


The last point sounds pretty harsh.
Maybe consider support the artist by purchasing this work on https://www.dlsite.com/girls/work/=/product_id/RJ429568.html
It's only around $6!

Thanks for the english translation regardless!
Posted on 15 January 2023, 09:15 by:   nekoknight    PM
Score +39
I'm grateful for the translation, but watermarking sucks.
Posted on 15 January 2023, 09:48 by:   Yefta    PM
Score +250
Lmao this artist will ban/block anyone who speak English or other language at his work on Twitter. There this dude comment about his ghost H-doujin and he got block.
Posted on 15 January 2023, 10:36 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +403
a lot of made up dialogue, moans, and sfx

003
OG: 地獄ー 閻魔大王の審判の元罰として様々な責め苦を受ける六道の最下層 / その責め苦を亡者に与えるのが地獄の下級役人である獄卒の仕事だ
TL: "Hell, here souls receive various tortures as punishment depends on their karma." / "The junior officer will determine the punishment of the dead"
ED: punishments are determined by King Enma (Yama) and the low ranking officers will carry out them out

OG: 下級役人の多く住む地域の路地裏にひっそりと拠点を構える自殺専門回収業者"拾手屋"
TL: "There's an area called soul collector, it is the shop area where officers collect the damned souls. The shops[sic] called 'pick-up' shop"
ED: he just describes the shop's location which is in an area where many low ranking officers live. he also mentions that it specializes in collecting suicide victims

010
you left bubbles blank on a couple panels in this page

OG: そうだ…
TL: "But I can't..."
ED: "that's right..." she just came up with her idea in the next bubble

OG: 早くイってしまえば
TL: "Stop touching myself"
ED: she's saying if she just cums then [things will be better]

OG: こんな大人しそうな子が…
TL: "Such a lewd child"
ED: he's reacting to how quiet/reserved she would [normally] look

012
OG: 最後に教えてあげようが
TL: "Shall I show you, one time?"
ED: he's asking if he should show her one last thing [before she meets her fate]

013
OG: 快楽拾おうと腰動かして…
TL: "She's moving her hips"
ED: missing detail, "in search of pleasure"

OG: 無意識か?
TL: "can I go deeper?"
ED: "Unconsciously?"

OG: 相当自分で慣らしたんだな
TL: "She get[sic] used to it so easily"
ED: he's wondering if she got used to it on her own

OG: は…はひッ
TL: "Ahhh"
ED: I usually don't point out rewritten moans/sfx but this is her reply to his question. she says yes

OG: じれったいけど…きもちい
TL: "it feels...so good"
ED: missing detail, she says it feels good despite her being irritated/impatient

OG: あッ♥ / イイとこあたると…っ / しゅごい…
TL: "Yes" / "Keep thrusting" / "Your fingers"
ED: "Ah! ♥" and then she tells him how amazing it feels when he hits the right spots

014
OG: じれったくないきもちいいのもあるよ
TL: "Are you feeling good just by my fingers?"
ED: he's telling her that she can feel good without being irritated/impatient too

017
OG: おお…いきなり
TL: "I can't"
ED: he's thinking about how her reaction is coming outta nowhere

018
OG: 自慰狂いの末に腹上死だもんな / 経験はなくても知識は豊富か
TL: "after playing with herself" / "she want[sic] to give me a blowjob now"
ED: he's thinking to himself about how she died masturbating and has no experience but still knows a lot about what to do

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OG: やば…
TL: "Ha"
ED: this isn't a moan and he's reacting to how close he's getting

OG: は…あッ / イ…ッ / イクぞッ
TL: "Haa" / "Ahn" / "Ngh"
ED: after the first bubble he's actually saying stuff, not just grunting. he's announcing that he's gonna cum

020
OG: まずいな…
TL: "Aaanngghh"
ED: more dialogue rewritten as moans/grunts. "This is bad..."

OG: 収まんねぇ
TL: "What if it won't fit..."
ED: he's thinking about how he's unable to control his lust

022
OG: 早く…
TL: "Put it in..."
ED: she's just hurrying him up

OG: 力、抜いて
TL: "I can't wait anymore"
ED: he's telling her to relax

023
OG: しゅごい…っ / えっちしてる / 生のおちんぽ私の膣内に
TL: "I'm sorry for having sex with your raw cock" / "But it feels so...good..."
ED: she's commenting on how amazing it is that she's having sex and then about how his raw cock is inside her

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OG: 知らないとこ届いてるっ
TL: "Does it feel that good?"
ED: wrong speaker. she's saying he's reaching places she didn't know about

OG: そうだねきもちいい?
TL: "I don't know"
ED: wrong speaker. he's asking if it feels good (direct response to prev bubble)

025
OG: またイクっ
TL: "Do you like it?"
ED: "I'm cumming again"

OG: は…っ / イキっぱ奥気に入ったの?
TL: "When I put it deep?"
ED: this should be your TL for the 2 bubbles in this panel combined into 1

030
OG: またっ♥イクっ♥よのぎしゃっ♥しゅごいっ♥
TL: "Say it again say you feel good"
ED: wrong speaker. she says she's cumming again and she tells Yonogi how amazing he is

031
OG: 膣奥っ♥膣奥っ♥しゅご…ひ♥
TL: "Yes, go deeper make a mess of me"
ED: she's just commenting on how good it feels deep inside her pussy

032
OG: そろそろだな…腰…抜けそ
TL: "I can't even stop my waist from moving"
ED: he's thinking about how he's nearly there and how his hips are about to give out

OG: 品座若葉
TL: "Seiza Wakaba"
ED: looks like Shinaza

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OG: あーたまにあるんだよねぇ組織が細分化してから連絡ミス
TL: "Ah well, it could happen when the souls get distracted by something"
ED: he says it happens because the organization is fragmented and there's miscommunication (referencing the reorganization from the early pages)

OG: あ、今日は帰っていいよ先週残業多かったでしょ
TL: "You can go home today since you work overtime"
ED: since he worked overtime a lot the previous week
Posted on 15 January 2023, 11:34 by:   hobohobo    PM
Score +126
Damn thought this was a good translation for a sec.
Posted on 15 January 2023, 17:31 by:   TheKidAgain    PM
Score +191
Imagine being upset other people speak different languages. Either a nationalist toolbag or deeply insecure people are talking behind their back. Either way, screw this artist even if they do good work.
Posted on 15 January 2023, 18:47 by:   brandivolgio    PM
Score +14
The new saga begins!
Posted on 19 January 2023, 12:03 by:   Lightpowder    PM
Score +16
@TheKidAgain
Well in general asians are racist af so it's somewhat expected.
Posted on 22 January 2023, 02:58 by:   Sinistralitee    PM
Score +31
@Yefta dude, this artist blocked me after commenting "the ghost fucking continues" on his cover for the part 2 of the series, I thought he just got offended with that, but I guess that's the case.

@TheKidAgain I don't really see it like that, I guess they just got pissed by the amount of people stealing his work and translating his work into english he probably just went crazy with it and just block/ban anyone that might steal their work.

after all there is a warning at the end of this book, in english, saying they will take down any reups and translations.

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