The artist started this comic years and years ago and yet barely no progression or transformation 😑

This must be among the must slow progress tg comic ever...

Last edited on 03 October 2022, 02:02.

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Nah this one is bad but the slowest progressing coming in the history of tg comics deff belongs to CONTROL that crap is 20 months of gay sex teasing of things to come that never happen and just draw on and on and on lol at least this has somthing going

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Bit of feedback on what makes a panel. pages 122 to 129 are all a sequence of Robert walking out of the room. that is 7 images while honestly 2 or 3 would be enough. 1 start walking, 2 look at phone, 3 opening door. and even that is quite a lot for a comic. the way this is made looks like you want to animate it. with the long shots establishing a scene and such. but for a comic that makes it rather annoying to read. the reader fills in the spaces in between steps. an extra image can just be an extra click to get to the rest of the story. And I don't mean every image needs text! for example 143 to 145 is rather good! it shows a moment of thought. but there needs to be something else happening each image. you would be able to get away with multiple images showing one thing if you had an actual comics page with multiple panels laid out in one image. that way the reader can see the transition in one go. but now its sometimes as if you took a movie and made a power point presentation of it.

so 2 things:
1 if the character initiates a simple action the reader can complete that in their head. no need to show each step of walking to the door.
2 transitions or gliding shots on 1 page only. other wise I see the screen slowly getting dark and already know what the next few images are going to be.

also means less work for you :p

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This isn't some documentary on how things work. We don't need 5 different images of putting things into a blender to blend them.

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420 pages of boring. I give up.

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So..sloooooooow 😮‍💨

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start at page 343 to skip useless stuffs

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Yes it's slow, but you can always just wait a couple months and come back when the artist reaches page 1000, can't you?

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