[condiment moderately (Maeshima Ryou)] Dosukebe Kyonyuu JC ga Kounai Onanie Suru Hanashi | A Story About a Slutty, Big-Breasted JC Who Masturbates in School [English] [Digital]

Posted on 25 January 2023, 04:58

Uploader Comment

Saw this and fell in love with it. Looked easy enough to do, so I did it in about a week.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 05:12 by: asurast

Uhooo, nice! Thanks for this gem!

Posted on 25 January 2023, 05:46 by: Eden of Shirock

Just fuckin tiring.

Last edited on 25 January 2023, 08:38.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 05:47 by: cutegyaru

Oh, great. Another "translator" guessing the meaning of whatever DeepL shits out. Fantastic. You just HAD to go for Maeshima Ryo too, didn't you?

When your lines aren't wrong, they are so incredibly mechanical and devoid of any texture I know you just plugged this into MTL and called it a day.

rough translation

49 TLd pages = 12 mistakes. This is just a sample. This is stacked to the roof with mistakes.

Page 4
Your TL: ...dream...
JP text: 夢かぁ
Intent: I guess a single word is too much to understand. "A dream, huh...?"

Page 7
Your TL: Wake up and cum in the morning
JP text: 寝起き朝オナでイク～
Intent: Idk why your tense is written as a command, but also you're missing stuff. "I'm cumming from getting up and shlicking in the morning!" or "Shlicking right after getting up!"

Page 9
Your TL: pink rotor
JP text: ピンクのローター
Intent: False friend. Rotor = vibrating egg. A rotor in EN means something completely different.

Page 9
Your TL: You can't be a middle schooler with those tits
JP text: この乳で中学生無理でしょｗｗｗｗ
Intent: Again, no idea why it's formulated as an interdiction. Also, omissions. "There's no way you're in middle school with a rack like this, hehehe."

Page 10
Your TL: Rubbing the rotor feels good...
JP text: ローター触れて気持ちいい・・・
Intent: She's not the one rubbing the egg. It's the egg rubbing against her (duh?)

Page 10
Your TL: I want to have sex with you, too...
JP text: 私もセックスしてみたい・・・
Intent: She's talking about sex IN GENERAL. "I also wanna try fucking..."

Page 12
Your TL: You... didn't you have brown hair?
JP text: お前～髪の毛茶色くないか？
Intent: He's asking WHY she has brown hair./being suspicious she dyed her hair brown.

Page 12
Your TL: hii...
JP text: ひ・・・
Intent: She's not saying hi, that's a yelp.

Page 12
Your TL: Neat and clean!
JP text: シャンとしろシャンと
Intent: He's telling her to straighten up (her posture).

Page 13
Your TL: Guidance, guidance!
JP text: 指導だ指導！
Intent: I know it's very tempting to not try to understand what you're reading, but c'mon. JP is unfortunately highly contextual. "I'm just giving her some guidance!"

Page 13
Your TL: I got flustered lightly.
JP text: か・・・軽くイっちゃった
Intent: I... came a little.

Page 13
Your TL: Today might be a good day from this morning
JP text: 今日は朝から良い日かも
Intent: Your sentence makes no sense, probably because you're being literal. "Today might just be awesome all around." (Lit.: Today starting from the morning might be a good day.)

Fuck it, I'll re-do this when I have time.

edit: typos
edit 2: promise kept https://e-hentai.org/g/2605140/c3f2444662/

Last edited on 10 July 2023, 01:23.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 06:24 by: Eden of Shirock

@cutegyaru glad guys like you are here to set the record straight. Sigh... I feel like a solid chunk of uploads lately have been mtl, and im getting tired of it. Seriously tired.

Last edited on 25 January 2023, 08:43.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 06:26 by: tealsack

@cutegyaru I'd rather you not redo this soon. In my opinion you should wait at least a year if not more. Otherwise more people will flood the site with terrible translations

Posted on 25 January 2023, 06:35 by: AutumQueen92

yeah, best not to redo them so soon. it ill justify what the mtl shills are trying to do. where are the mods to clamp down on these users

Posted on 25 January 2023, 06:57 by: Nyxtani

Why is there still no machine-translated tag?

Posted on 25 January 2023, 07:10 by: Daruna

you coomers are seriously starting to piss me off.

the first two people comment lapping up literal garbage. do you not have functioning eyeballs? no brain in your skulls? looking at this shit has all the hallmarks of someone who has no idea what they're doing yet managed to somehow throw together a 60 page book "in a week" because it was "easy enough" - no periods outside of ellipses, unnatural sentences, trash typesetting. the thing is, he's right, it IS an easy fucking book to read, yet this is very clearly MTL even if you don't know japanese. and you people decide to fucking thank the guy?

I'm really starting to loathe you people more and more. you two are the personification of the userbase on this site. kojima was right, none of you deserve to be free.

i like maeshima ryo a lot, and this book is solid too - i even bought it irl:
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/800241942583181332/1063019149745467442/rn_image_picker_lib_temp_56721273-76f0-4415-b2ac-eb9128e83c56.jpg

but the state of the site seriously makes me think every single one of you just deserve to wallow in shit content for eternity. fuck you.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 07:28 by: Zaiup

Not the lolis please... Why is this shitty trending of MTL is not ending? What is happening? Damn... I think that nh may be the cause of it, most of those MTL shit uploaders just upload their garbage because they aim it to the nh users, and of course nh users eat it like parasites.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 07:41 by: Coffedrug

this a shame, those nipples on the cover got me hyped when I saw the raw.

people should just wait for a good translation

Posted on 25 January 2023, 08:48 by: viltras

YOU FUCKER
YOU MOTHERFUCKER I WILL RAIN HELLFIRE UPON YOU

Posted on 25 January 2023, 08:50 by: yuyuchan

Meh, it's not like there is a lot of plot to follow so knowing the approximation of what the girl is mumbling thanks to MTL is nice, too.
I'm here to look at drawings, not to read.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 09:21 by: BossMizuryu

i kinda understood thanks had a good fap

Posted on 25 January 2023, 10:08 by: asurast

@cutegyaru
As always, thanks.

@Daruna
I know you mad, the reason why i put the comment first was because the first 5-6 pages was fine. The translation looks while literal, It's fine, the editing was also not white box put all over and at least it was at correct resolution. I got no time to inspect everything like @cutegyaru does. Its not that i justified MTL or whatever(I dont even know if the uploader was MTL specialist or whatever since he didnt put it in his title), i am same as @Eden of shirock, tired of inspecting everything i read in here. Also you might be correct to think i didnt have a normally function eyeballs and brain, since already too tired doing other things more important. Well, thanks there still @cutegyaru around :D.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 10:28 by: Vigtyr

"oh boy a new translation"
*sees the rating*

oh nooooooo :(

Posted on 25 January 2023, 10:46 by: Daruna

@asurast

cope more you ESL cocksucking bitch. you're barely even an EOP going by how you can only just manage to string together english words into a coherent sentence.

you have literally zero standards. you are the reason this site fucking sucks. my and my group's output is wasted on drips of piss like you. you are actually incapable of recognizing good quality, and you are the reason this scene is dying a pathetic death.

it's because of people like me and cutegyaru that the doujin scanlation scene hasn't fucking succumbed to the same sorry state that the sfw scanlation scene is in, and it's IN SPITE of people like you, you chucklefuck clown bitch.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 11:20 by: asurast

@Danura
Yeah true to that. Your group really save this sfw scanlation scene, so thank you for that.
Also, true for my standard being too low since i didnt really being here to read a literature works and I had already read the raw.
Well, keep up the good work. Its good to let those all out.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 11:38 by: tealsack

@cutegyaru I'd rather you not redo this soon. In my opinion you should wait at least a year if not more. Otherwise more people will flood the site with terrible translations. Funny how my comment and
@ AutumQueen92's comment got downvoted when mentioning not redoing with haste. By the circumstantial context, to me this is a scheme by the individuals that MTL to get stuff translated and thus downvoting comments suggesting otherwise. I could be wrong, but this is what it looks like to me.

@Daruna
I completely agree with your thoughts. Do not think your efforts are not appreciated. You, cutegyaru, and countless others are champions.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 13:31 by: MistaLOD

@cutegyaru

Well thanks for telling me how I was entirely wrong lol. I actually really like the insight you provided in your comment, and hope this gets translated by someone who is much better versed in Japanese than me. I tried my best using the tools at my disposal, but it was well below standard, and that's fair. I knew that there was probably going to be some phrases that I didn't know about. I'm not going to defend myself on this one.

As soon as a better translation comes around, I'll disown this. I'll most likely only work on translating works that haven't been translated for years from now on instead of works that just came out.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 13:37 by: tealsack

@ uploader
No do not work on anything. You are cancer

Posted on 25 January 2023, 14:14 by: gigasgmx

@cutegyaru
I think "rotor" is actually technically correct (those little vibrators due use small electromagnetic motors, after all).

Posted on 25 January 2023, 16:46 by: spierdalacz

@Nyxtani Because retard mods and jannies will sit on their asses twiddling their thumbs and banning people mentioning the problem, until it grows past the point of no return, like with "defaced" tag.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 19:05 by: TKLF

@gigasgmx
No, that'd be like translating "tiger" to "cat".
It's "technically correct", but it's a wrong translation.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 20:03 by: Johnny1337

surely this is still better than nothing? you can still derive the intended meaning from the machine tranlation.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 21:06 by: slapforce

oh fuck off with this shit. keep your machine translation garbage to yourself and your circle of coomers.

Posted on 26 January 2023, 02:33 by: Ahegaosensei

Since these are so incorrect they might as well be ragged with rewrite.

Posted on 26 January 2023, 15:32 by: MrSquigglesIAm

thank you for the great translation!! awesome stuff

Posted on 26 January 2023, 18:33 by: hon.

Well damn, stumbling upon an English translation of this doujin so soon really seemed to good to be true.
"My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined."

Posted on 02 February 2023, 00:35 by: junk123455

>(disowned)
Great, now I can't filter it out by uploader.

Posted on 16 June 2023, 20:12 by: headcrap158

This ain't a rough translation. This is more of a "ruff translation", cause only silly bitches like you look at this verbal regurgitation ChatGPT spat out and think "Yeah, this is accurate, let's upload this"

Posted on 01 November 2023, 02:57 by: lurphysmaw

uploader: "Saw this and fell in love with it. Looked easy enough to do, so I did it in about a week."

If this is how "well" you treat things you "love", I hope you never have children or pets.

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