Another Kiriko book from Kurotane sensei. This one is so silly I was laughing through the whole translation / edition procces xD

You should really punctuate properly.
You aren't ending your lines with full stops / periods.
Also, my personal nitpick but you should also be using different fonts for all the SFX you're doing.

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RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/2322894/654577635d/
CHN: https://e-hentai.org/g/2327327/f75af2fb20/

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Heh, you naughty little kitty... ah, those poor Idols, always being taken advantage of. She loved it :D

Awesome, nice work, thanks for all the effort and sharing :)

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"To be frank, it reeks off fishy. I've never believed this sort of stuff since ways before..."

It's alright to not speak English as a first language, but you really should have a proofreader if you're going to make English translations.

As far as typesetting goes, if you're going over the text box (e.g. "Kiriko!?" in page 3), you should outline your text, which you obviously know how to do since you did it for sfx.

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