This is the worst thing I have ever seen.

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I think the colors look pretty nice, but it would help if you, uh, actually colored everything. Or at least colored the characters in every panel.

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B/W : https://e-hentai.org/g/129622/70301e5f97/

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@gohack you know, no explanation with criticism is pretty much useless - like what am I supposed to take from it lol, not like I'll be able to improve the colouring to match what people seem to like? Besides the next person said the colours look nice, so that's quite some variance. Care to provide details next time ya know

@Neet_Patchy Most people don't care much about the non sexual panels so I didn't colour the guy in those for some panels...also greyscale background makes the characters stand out imo so honestly, I don't think I'll be doing backgrounds unless it's a commission

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@Ecchify

do the colours better

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