002 (012) OG: TS運輸でーす。お荷物お届けに参りました… TL: "This is delivery. We're here to deliver your package" ED: delivery company name is TS
003 (023) OG: ご苦労様ですー TL: "You are the owner." ED: she's thanking him
OG: あれ…荷物は? TL: "Oh...where's your luggage?" ED: "the/my package"
OG: えっ!?荷物ですか? TL: "Luggage?" ED: package
004 (026) OG: 荷物ですかって… TL: "I used to be your baggage?" ED: "Why're you asking me?" she's wondering why he's confused
OG: TS運輸の方よね…? TL: "You're the one from the second transfusion, right?" ED: delivery company name is TS
OG: あれ、あの、ケンジくん…じゃないです? TL: "Oh, um, Kenzie...Kenji..." ED: he's asking about someone named Kenji-kun
OG: あっ TL: N/A ED: Ah-
005 (027) OG: 大きな荷物がここにあるじゃなーい TL: "I've got a big bag of them right here" ED: "Don't you have a big package right here"
OG: ちょっ / あのっ TL: "That (someo or foursomet quarterng distan.. from both speaker and listener, or situation unfamiliar to both speaker and listener)" ED: "wai-" / "um-"
Holy fuck this was a painful read. It's not just "MTL" bad. There was no effort put into this. Didn't even bother to make sure the words fit in the fucking bubbles (I always make sure to either adjust the bubbles or add new ones in my translations).
It's so painful I'm halfway tempted to translate this one myself just to cover up this atrocity.