MILF + daughter

Who translated this?

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translated by cgrascal http://cgrascal.wordpress.com/

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Ugh... I don't know if it's the original text or the translation, but the dialogue is absolutely horrible. -.-' And so is the story, I could write a better one that leads into the same situation half-asleep. The art is nice, though.

Edit: Now that I've checked the author's other translated works I'm positive that it's the original text and not the translation that's messed up.

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It's not just that the story/dialogue is bad, at it's core it's pretty standard as far as porn (or soap opera) plots. The problem is that the plot tries to be complex (I assume) in too small a space, so the progression during the "story" part goes so fast there isn't enough time/space for real dialogue or transitions and, as a result, there isn't any logical progression from one event/page to the next.

First the tutor arrives, the girl flirts with him while he thinks about how he was kind of hoping for this, then the girl starts undressing herself/him and the mom catches them, then in a rapid-fire info dump, we learn the guy apparently WASN'T wanting the girl (Could have fooled me with that internal monologue), the mother had a thing with him in the past, and the daughter implies that the mother may have slept with one of her students (this is not addressed). One page later and the girl is still wanting the guy (strange, but again, this is porn).

One more page, and the guy is suddenly undressing the mom and the daughter, both of whom offer no argument. What? What happened to the long-lost lover shit? What about the father, where is he? If you're going to put a story in your porn, at least finish it (the story, the artist definitely finished the porn, at least). Have the shitty plot go somewhere.

This is a really long post, but this is just stupid. Even shitty rewriters never butcher a story to this degree. It's like the guy thought it would be a good idea to squeeze a full soap opera plot into two pages of his comic.

At least the art is pretty good.

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i figured it would end with the daughter knocked up and it revealed that it's his daughter. i'm kinda disappointed, since the setup was right there.

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There is no A in definitely. Would've been ace if you actually took the time to run a spell check for the translation.

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@errata
The tutor was the underclass-man of the mother. there is no additional lover in the story.

this means it's basically the following:
tutor (ex lover of mother) comes to help the daughter study. girl gets horny for tutor and initiates the sexy times. mom comes in, reveals that he was her ex lover. threesome with miniature traces of rivalism and pretectionism (no~ don't fuck my daughter, fuck me ; ~am i better than mom?).

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RAW: https://e-hentai.org/s/723f69fb92/464542-87
German Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/496712/550f79ee1f/
French Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/382573/28de2c41b5/
Spanish Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/653856/a6a196af66/
Spanish Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/743449/077a23a3a8/
Vietnamese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/338510/5fa181dd02/

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Was it just me? Or did she hinted at babging her dad?

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