05: that should be my place, it's mine. => (redundant) / That should be my place, mine! 07: i won the victory => (redundant) 10: i gave him => i'm giving him 13: Stop going to suck so hard => Stop sucking so hard 16: i don't think i'll live to the end of the day and be sucked dry by them => i don't think i'll live to the end of the day, they're sucking me dry 17: Kirito~ want to cum, right? => Kirito~ wants to cum, right? / Kirito~ You want to cum, right? 21: This is much cum! => There is so much cum! / So much cum! 22: Is because => It's because 26: Who will save me~! => Someone save me~!
Base +8
Posted on 13 February 2023, 21:14 by: alcantarilla
Score +17
Let's be honest...the real winner here was Liz, lol
@orasmase
All those mistakes are probably because it was the artist himself who translated it to English and they're Japanese, though I gotta say it's a surprisingly readable attempt despite that.