Hi everyone,

this is the first chapter of my first story ever published. I´m not a professional 3D Artist much rather a regular white collar worker with a passion for "special" literature who just gotten into 3D Modeling.

I Hope you enjoy the Story and stay tuned for further publishings since the quality will only be getting better from here on onward.

If you intend to support my on this Journey feel free to check out my Supporter Site: https://subscribestar.adult/tal3s-of-debauchery

Pretty nice!

Just one thing, if I may, the brother's narration is hard to read imo. You should maybe change the font/color/background for his text to improve readability.

keep it up! i liked it.

Base +6, somerandomdude33 +22, Envy123hawlet +5, 3dnoob +5

Thanks for the feedback. Work on the second chapter is already going strong and i´ll see to changing his texts going forward to increase readability ;)

Base +6

Heads up: artist credit goes at the start of the title, not the end.

Base +29, 3dnoob +5, Woody Pack +6

Ah okay. I will change it for the next one. Thanks for the heads up!

Base +6, 3dnoob +5

L'histoire s'annonce bien , bon courage ;)

Base +1