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https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/37931847

Japanese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/1085326/4641274c1e/

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is this MTL?

002
OG: 人気のないところに連れて来たと思ったらどうしたんだよ急に…
TL: "I know we are in a remote place but what if someone see's[sic] us?"
ED: he's wondering what got into her even though he was thinking of taking her to somewhere secluded already

OG: え…
TL: "Do you want me to stop?"
ED: this is just a surprised reaction to the prev line. she already asks if he doesn't enjoy it in the next bubble

003
OG: だってさ
TL: "Why...?"
ED: "I mean"/"because" just not "why"

OG: ライバルはいっぱいいるし一夏は全然気づいてくれないし、その上織斑先生にも見とれちゃってるしっ
TL: "Ichika never notices my feelings and I worry that one of my rivals will take him from me"
ED: missing detail, she brings up Orimura-sensei's feelings as well (which is pretty relevant considering her relation to Ichika)

OG: んむぅ…いちかあ…
TL: "Hmmm...just a little more"
ED: "Hmmm" is a moan and she's just saying his name

OG: ばかだなシャルは
TL: "God, I'm such an idiot"
ED: wrong speaker, he's teasing her

004
OG: えへへ
TL: "Ahem"
ED: this is a laugh

OG: 僕もうこんなになっちゃったよ
TL: "I can't wait anymore"
ED: she's just directing the attention to how her body's reacting

OG: お、おう
TL: "Don't hold back"
ED: wrong speaker, he's just agreeing

OG: 入れるぞ
TL: "You can put it in"
ED: wrong speaker

OG: うん
TL: "Wow"
ED: this is just her consenting

OG: 中でごりごりって
TL: "... my body is squeezing around him"
ED: she's talking about his motion inside of her

OG: とろとろなのにきつく絞めつけてくるよ
TL: "Charlotte's insides are so amazing, it's so warm and it's so tight!"
ED: wet not warm

005
OG: いちかああすき♥
TL: "Spuuut!"
ED: this is her saying she loves him

OG: だいすき
TL: "Ichika!"
ED: this is her saying she loves him

006
OG: …ーい
TL: "C-charl..."
ED: this is the last bit of her confession

OG: まだ少しフラフラするか？
TL: "You had us worried for a moment"
ED: he's asking if she's still dizzy

OG: 一夏 / 僕は…？
TL: "Worried?" / "I don't"
ED: she's recalling the events that just happened (directly related to next line)

OG: さっきの一夏との触れ合いは…
TL: "My special moment with Ichika is now just a memory"
ED: she doesn't think it's just a memory, it's an incomplete thought

and you left the final panel untranslated where she attacks him

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