Continue the translation plz

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She stuck a flashlight in her vag.

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Oh boy,people are going to be annoyed at chapter 7.

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With chapter 8 right after, chapter 7 basically becomes more of an afterthought

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The way his tongue is drawn is bizarre on pg 13, I get it's to show some of it is inside, but it definitely looks like a tentacle.

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The most accurate sex education

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"You just tried to rape a girl, don't do it again, now you can go."
This proves that police and judges are not needed.

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page 85... why did he say daughter?

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@SerafX

Why, what happens in chap 7?

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Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1726282/128b5ef3f4

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123 153 183 pages for now, so tagging 31 39+ 45+ things for rough TL

002
OG: カナ
TL: N/A
ED: Kana

004
OG: 兄貴たちの代わりに俺がしっかり保護者しね〜とな〜…
TL: "I got to get a grip for onii chan and his wife's sake"
ED: he's saying he needs to be a good guardian in place of his older brother (aniki, not oniichan. you get this right on page 6) and older brother's wife

005
OG: まぁ私も急に海外に転勤する両親についてかないわ
TL: "Since my parents are going to transfer abroad on such a short notice, I've no choice but to abide"
ED: Kana's friend is saying she wouldn't follow her parents going abroad either, if she were in Kana's place

OG: うん
TL: "Un"
ED: ...yeah?

006
OG: 子供時代のように仕切りが復活するとは…
TL: "however, I got to split the room space into half with a partition"
ED: missing detail, he never thought the partition from their childhood would return (directly related to next panel)

012
OG: 舌がアソコに
TL: "his tongue is on her"
ED: on her pussy

016
OG: 昔とは当然違うのに…
TL: "She changed so much..."
ED: missing detail, he knows she obviously won't be the same as back in the day

OG: どっかで俺の事を一番好きって思ってたのかな
TL: "Back then, she used to love me so much"
ED: he's talking about how she loved him the most at one point in time

018
OG: 何考えてる？
TL: "What are you doing."
ED: thinking

OG: さっきのは不可抗力でもこれは…
TL: "That was unintentional"
ED: unavoidable (to say the least)

024
OG: アソコに指が沈んでいく…
TL: "that my fingers sink into them"
ED: he's talking about her pussy

025
OG: かなり濡れてきた…
TL: "It's wet now"
ED: missing detail, he's mentioning the considerable wetness

027
OG: それとも昨日見たあのへんな夢のせい？
TL: "or is it because of that strange dream I had"
ED: missing detail, yesterday

028
OG: それより早く食べろよ～
TL: "Anyway. Breakfast is ready."
ED: he's telling her to hurry up and eat

OG: もう！
TL: Mou!
ED: no comment, esp since you even translate it a few panels later...

029
OG: だめだよここ屋上だよ…
TL: "We can't..."
ED: missing detail, they're on the roof

OG: あ♡
TL: N/A
ED: ah ♡

OG: やっと見つけた～
TL: "Found you~"
ED: missing detail, finally

030
OG: 好きだけどハジメテをあんなに迫られたら困っちゃう…
TL: "He keeps taking my first time without proper planning. It's starting to irritate me"
ED: she's saying she likes him but doesn't appreciate how he thirsty he is to take her first. your TL doesn't make sense unless she has multiple firsts to take lol

036-037
OG: もう… / 挿入れる…
TL: "It is" / "She's ready..."
ED: he's talking about how he can stick it in

038
OG: ごほんっ！
TL: "Coughs!"
ED: I'm gonna assume your typesetter just didn't change this to actual onomatopoeia

040
OG: ごちそうさまでした
TL: "gochisousamadeshita"
ED: oh come on you literally translated this on page 28

041
OG: ふくらはぎの血行も良くしてむくみを取って
TL: "As for your leg...the blood circulation looks fine"
ED: with his massage he's improving blood circulation in her calves to reduce swelling

OG: 間を取らないでよ！
TL: "Don't spread my legs!"
ED: she's not happy about how long he paused before answering

OG: 少し強めにしないと太ももの血管には効かないんだよ
TL: "If I don't apply more strength, it won't have any effect"
ED: missing detail, effect on the blood vessels in her thighs

OG: でもこれを頑張れば代謝も良くなってスリムになる
TL: "Your metabolism will increase if you manage to hold it in"
ED: missing detail, she'll also get slimmer

042
OG: 足の付け根もマッサージしとくと骨盤から腰回りにいいんだ
TL: "We need to massage your base too. It'll be good for your hips and pelvis"
ED: massage her [hip] joints? or groin?

OG: ちょっとくすぐったいけど気持ちいい
TL: "this doesn't feel that bad"
ED: missing detail, it's slightly ticklish

OG: ここのツボが一番効くんだよ
TL: "massaging this bump gives the best effect"
ED: pressure point, same on page 44

045
OG: アソコのことじゃない…
TL: "So he wasn't going to ask about that..."
ED: ask about her pussy [being wet]

047
OG: ず…ずるいよ〜！いきなり後ろからは
TL: "H-Hey! That is not fair~"
ED: missing detail, she didn't appreciate getting taken from behind so suddenly

051
OG: 若い男子はこの感覚の前では本能的になるから気をつけるんだよ
TL: "With this sensation, the man would definitely move by his instinct instead of rationality"
ED: missing detail, he tells her to be careful

OG: カナは可愛いから最後まで強引にしようとする奴が多い…
TL: "Because you're cute, they would definitely seduce you to let them in"
ED: missing detail, he's saying many people would try to force her to go all the way since she's cute

OG: 後から違う刺激が…
TL: "It feels strange"
ED: she's saying it's a different kind of stimulation towards the back

edit: you added an entire chapter but we only needed to read 2 more pages to reach the minimum number of errors for rough TL again...

052
OG: 膣内には特に感じるポイントがあってそこを刺激されると女性はイクことがあるんだ
TL: "There are women who cum from stimulating a single point inside their vagina"
ED: he's saying there's an especially sensitive spot in the vagina that women can cum from when stimulated

OG: 気持ちよさで気絶しそうになったり人によっては潮を吹いたりすることかな
TL: "it differs with each woman but there's a spot that makes you feel so good you feel like you're about to faint"
ED: "it can mean fainting from the pleasure or squirting, depending on the person"

OG: しお？…
TL: "Want to test it out?"
ED: wrong speaker. she's repeating "squirt" after he mentioned it

OG: 試した方が早いか
TL: "It's easy to do it"
ED: he's saying it would be faster to just try it

054
OG: ナカの感じるポイントも / ちゃんと覚えておくんだよ
TL: "Now that I've taught you" / "Your stimulation spot"
ED: he's telling her to remember where her "stimulation spots" inside her are

edit: an entire chapter added but only another 5 pages needed to hit the minimum error count

OG: ナカの感じるポイントもちゃんと覚えておくんだよ
TL: "Now I've taught you" / "Your stimulation spot"
ED: he's telling her to remember the spots that make her cum

OG: カナが卒業して自分の行動に責任を取れるようになってたら何も言わないさ
TL: "Once you graduate, you'll be responsible for your own actions"
ED: missing detail, and he can't tell her anything

055
OG: もっと気持ちよくなること…する？
TL: "Do you want to feel more good?"
ED: the word you're looking for is "better"

056
OG: これってまさか…
TL: "That..."
ED: missing tone, she's in disbelief at what she's being shown

057
OG: 変になっちゃう！！
TL: "This feels weird!!"
ED: "I'm going crazy!!"

059
OG: こうやって濡れた入り口を少しずつ / 広げるように当てられるのは…どう？
TL: "How does it feel your hole slowly spreading" / "due to the juices?"
ED: the TL doesn't even make sense. he's asking how it feels to have her wet pussy spread open little by little (by his cock)

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Remember hentai rule Rape its good if nobody report it to cops. Rape=pure love. Never forget that sick japan people really get exsided read story where shit like this happened and what happened its Girl like boy then uncle rape her sometime later girl dont love guy but still confused what she feel about uncle. Rape=pure love.

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The white beams of light type of censorship here makes it so I can't even tell if she is getting penetrated or not.

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This would be some of the hottest shit, but the level of censorship employed here completely ruins it.

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I am convinced the author is mentally retarded

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