English translation of "Elf Sakusei Jikken Maetsu ni Ochiru Kiyoki Tamashii" by Mizuno (358692). This is my first work of this kind so it may have some rough edges

Mhm delicious fem-man

Base +6, weigazod +10

did you retranslate this from Chinese? I only read three pages but you left uncleaned Chinese text and your TLs and sentence structures follow the Chinese TL. either way you used downscaled images

001
OG: 長い寿命と神秘の力を持つエルフの血液は万病を治療し不老長寿をもたらすという―
TL: "It's an elixir of long life made from elf blood, which is said to give longevity and mysterious powers"
ED: it's saying that the blood of elves (who live long lives and have mystical powers) is said to cure illnesses and bring eternal youth and longevity. this is also present in the Chinese TL (那是用據說有著增壽和神秘之力的精炅血液製成的醫治百病的長生不老藥)

OG: 我々は君達エルフ族の体内に宿るマナ…所謂魔力に興味があってね
TL: "We are only interested in the mana inside you elves"
ED: missing his clarification, he says they're only interested in the mana or the so called magic/magical power in the elves. this is also present in the Chinese TL (也就是所謂的魔力)

OG: シオン君
TL: 席昂君
ED: Shion-kun. you didn't translate this and just left it in Chinese

OG: 下衆が…っ
TL: "You inferior creatures..."
ED: it's more like lowlife but I can see how you got what you used from the Chinese TL (下等生物)

002
OG: その態度がいつまで続くものか
TL: "But how long will you last?"
ED: he's asking how long that attitude would last. this is present in the Chinese TL (這種態度)

OG: 森を追われた多くのエルフ族が安住の地を求めて移住を始めたのが十数年前
TL: "Most of the elves which lived in the forest migrated more than ten years ago in search of a safer place to live"
ED: missing detail, they were forced to migrate. This is omitted from the Chinese TL (依賴於森林的大多數精炅族為了尋找一個安全地居住地從十幾年前開始了移居)

OG: 自然と調和し神秘の力を持つがゆえに人間に搾取され続けた歴史を持っ彼らは
TL: "Because of their natural abilities, they have been hunted down by humans for a long time"
ED: it's saying the elves have been exploited by humans because of their harmonious relationship with nature and mysterious powers. the Chinese TL combined the reasons into one (調和自然的神秘力量)

OG: それでも欲深き人々の手からは逃れられず
TL: "However, 8 lustful humans kept hunting them down"
ED: it just says they couldn't escape the grasp of greed of humans, not sure where you got 8 from since it's not in the Chinese TL either (但即便如此慾望深重的人類也沒有放過他們)

OG: 虐殺・闇市での奴隷売買…果てはその血液が万病に効く薬になるという噂さえ立ちエルフ狩りが横行した未に
TL: "Torture, slave trade on the black market...The hunting is rampant, all because of the legend that elves blood can make an all-curing medicine"
ED: it's not that the rumors perpetuated them, the rumors arose on top of the torture and slave trade. The Chinese TL got this wrong (虐杀・黑市的奴隶买卖...皆是因血液可以制成包治百病之藥的传說而起而狩猎精炅横行的結果)

003
OG: そんな折―― / 闇オークションでエルフの少女を競り落とした貴族の屋敷に賊が入るという事件が相次いだ
TL: "However, one time" / "The mansion of the nobles who bid for the elf girl at the black market auction began to be attacked by thieves"
ED: there were a string of incidents, this is ambiguous in the Chinese TL (在黑市拍賣會上竟拍精炅族少女的貴族的豪宅相継開始發生盜賊入侵事件)

OG: ふざけるな！
TL: "Don't joke"
ED: "fuck you"? your line is directly from the Chinese TL (別開玩笑了!)

OG: これ以上何を奪おうと言う！？
TL: "Are you still not satisfied"
ED: he's asking what else his captors want to take from them. your line is directly from the Chinese TL (難道你們還不滿足嗎!?)

Base +24, Th3 Sl0th +6, 13potato +6, ThatOtherYou +6, kadyysh +7, xuanshen +6, eaglef2 +7