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(C101) [Junjou Hedgehog (Kaguyuzu)] Kimi wa Succubus - You are succubus. | You are a Succubus (Fate/Grand Order) [English] [Shiromaru]

(C101) [純情ハリネズミ (カグユヅ)] キミはサキュバス (Fate/Grand Order) [英訳]

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Posted:2023-03-04 00:50
Parent:2483528
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:182.4 MiB
Length:16 pages
Favorited:1007 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.59

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Posted on 04 March 2023, 00:50 by:   Shiromaruu    PM
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Posted on 03 March 2023, 22:51 by:   Pseudo-Nim    PM
Score -46
Tag "horns" should NOT be used with oni.

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/oni

On other hand - Description: A humanoid with 1-2 horns on their head and possibly pointy ears. Does NOT have wings or a tail.

Ergo - this depiction of Shuten Douji is NOT and oni, but a regular demon girl.
Posted on 03 March 2023, 23:18 by:   LegendaryBoyA    PM
Score +27
The wording on the middle panel of page 4 is extremely awkward. I'd probably go with like "I doubt its just a drink" "It was in a heart shaped flask"
Posted on 03 March 2023, 23:42 by:   Shiromaruu    PM
Score +26
@LegendaryBoyA
The idea I got from the original is that he isn't even sure it's supposed to be drank, since he says "飲み物かどうか [...]".
The second sentence does feel a bit awkward, especially because it's in a different tense.
Thanks for pointing those out! I'll give the first one a bit more thought, but I'll fix the flask one either way.
Posted on 03 March 2023, 23:50 by:   LegendaryBoyA    PM
Score +32
@Shiromaruu
I think its less "supposed to be drank" and more this could be drugs or medicine since those often use 飲む as their verb. Maybe making the 'just' in "I doubt its just a drink" bolded or putting it in italics might work
Posted on 04 March 2023, 02:24 by:   b51de    PM
Score +42
I like that you made a fair shot with the Kyoto accent. If it were me, I'd have done her like a southern belle.
Posted on 04 March 2023, 03:58 by:   kurehayagami    PM
Score +37
Kaguyuzu being the number one Guda x Shuten shippers as always.
Posted on 04 March 2023, 05:49 by:   Zegien    PM
Score +57
Kaguyuzu's Shuten is the best.
Posted on 05 March 2023, 14:22 by:   inferno cop    PM
Score +26
Kaguyuzu is Gudao x Shuten's strongest soldier, and we truly don't deserve it.
Posted on 05 August 2023, 05:02 by:   enigmabloom    PM
Score +6
At first my dick was diamonds, but that ending left the penis in my heart erect

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