"Chocolate banana"

...Are you sure about that, chief?

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Japanese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/2480722/f19af1084d/

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Not to rag on the TL which seems okay enough, but why do you keep omitting parts of the text?

p.3

>Please accept my first load in a long !!
In JP, it's not "long time" but a week precisely, and it's also "thick" load.

p.4

>And she began sucking on it shamelessly
while also being very loud/making loud noises/loudly

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