Bocchi the Cock or something

The part with Ikuyo seems to be out of order in all versions of this. Progression seems to make sense going pages 8, 6, 7, 5 then page 9.

Edit:

Still out of order for Ikuyo. Correct order: 7, 5, 6, 8.

Last edited on 13 March 2023, 23:43.

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https://youtu.be/K0XF_DZ90Ko

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Rough grammar, and it's also completely out of order. Pages listed below are in relation to the proper page order. Someone might want to check for rough TL, not my expertise but I noticed some oddities as well.

Page 2:
"Cut out the weird jokes" -> "Cut it out with the weird jokes"
"Dry cleaning it later will be a problem" -> "It'll be a pain to clean up later on"

Page 3:
"I never thought you were hiding such an amazing thing" -> "I never thought you would be hiding such an amazing thing"
"Your piercing is stimulating it while you wrap it around with your tongue" - >
"Your piercing is stimulating my cock as you wrap your tongue around it"

Page 4:
"You're just a poor pussy in the end" -> "Turns out you're just another weak bitch/worthless masochist after all"

Page 5:
"But they said you were feeling anemic and went here in the infirmary" -> "But they said you were feeling anemic and came down here to the infirmary"

Page 7:
"Actually, i saw you last time with the manager and her friend" -> "I saw what happened with the manager and her friend before"
"You're carving my entire insides into your shape"
-> "you're completely carving my insides into your shape"

Page 8(5):
"Don't you like your nipples getting teased while fucking" -> "Don't you like having your nipples teased/being played with while we fuck?"

Page 9:
"It's already school's closing time before I noticed" -> "I didnt even notice that school already ended"

Last edited on 13 March 2023, 18:35.

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^ tagging rough grammar

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Pages out of order

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Out of order and machine Translated.

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Out of Order and Rough Grammar?

I imagine the amount of embarrassment and shame the uploader must be feeling for such screw ups would make Bocchi proud.

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Btw, this is not full resolution. Same with the Japanese version.

Last edited on 22 March 2023, 13:33.

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@nix_uotan do you really assume that people who run thngs through MTL have any semblance of shame or embarassment?

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Finally Bocchi’s anxiety left her pent up to that release on page five.

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@ GimmeS, nix: If these vocal minority still act that way (read:you) I'm glad you never get what you want

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bocchi the chinpo

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