This is my first translation work, so apologies for any scuff. I may try to translate some other works down the road. I'd like to translate the sfx as well, but I'd want them to look as close to the original lettering as possible, so who knows?

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http://blog.livedoor.jp/h2o_uw/
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This should go without saying, but don't try this at home!

[3/16/2023] Fixed a few translation errors and edited some narration.

the feeling when your underwater stream "fans" actually has water torture and borderline necrophilia fetish

oh my, who could ever thought

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Thank you for the translation! I do hope you'll get to some other works of H2O, there are some that haven't been translated, and whether you wanna try to translate the lettering or not, I feel like you could try, because the option to download the original is always there. Or leave the option to have the original lettering with narrative translation-only as an alternative within the set.

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One suggestion: the references to seaweed are spurious. I don't know where you got the incorrect translation from, but I know that Google Translate gets this wrong. The word is 藻掻く ("mogaku") which means to struggle, squirm, or writhe. https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/%E3%82%82%E3%81%8C%E3%81%8F#Japanese

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@mailininin Thanks for pointing this out! I didn't question the mentions of seaweed since I figured that she must have been trying to grab onto some. I'll update the gallery to fix that soon.

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