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Korean translated by EXIV

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Your translation is so wrong it's almost making me laugh. You clearly copy-pasted DeepL output and called it a day.

Also, you keep using the wrong 1280x downsized version of the images.

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Your TL: But, ya know? I'm strong, I could beat ya.
JP: いいよー、でもね？あたし体力なら負けない自信があるんだよ？
Intent: 体力 means stamina. "But, y'know... I've got plenty of stamina, so I'm confident I won't lose to you."

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Your TL: You shouldn't have time to watch carefully in this situation
JP: やってる時はじっくり見る余裕もないはずだからね
Intent: She's teasing him. "Take a good look as it goes in... // because you're not (shouldn't) gonna be able to once we start fucking."

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Your TL: What now? Are you ready to go?
JP: なぁに？もう出そうって？
Intent: Lmfao. HOW DO YOU GET 出す WRONG? "Huh? You're about to cum already?

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Your TL: You just started thrusting you hips don't hold back
JP: 腰振り始めたばっかりじゃんダメ！我慢する！
Intent: Yeah, she's telling him the EXACT opposite. "We just started, so no! Hold it in!"

Page 2
Your TL: Yeah one, two
JP: はい いち、に
Intent: Just because I know you don't know wtf you're doing, I'm going to call this a mistake. The correct way to TL はい here would be with "okay" or "alright", as in "Alright, here we go! One! Two!"

Page 2
Your TL: Inside... I'm fine with you cumming inside
JP: 元気だねー中から殴られるみたい
Intent: Whew, you're full of energy! It's like you're pounding my insides (with your cum).

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Your TL: Even if you say that, I won't wait for you
JP: そんなこと言ったって敵（あたし）は待ってくれないよー？
Intent: Yeah, nah. "An enemy/opponent won't stand back and wait on you (even) if you call for a break."

Page 2
Your TL: Cutie
JP: nil
Intent: ?? This random addition doesn't even make sense/match the character.

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Your TL: Hmm...? Does it feel good, doctor?
JP: えー？そんなに気持ちいいの？
Intent: Not really what she says or how she phrases it. She's not really asking him anything. She's just teasing him. "Hmm? Does it really feel that good?"

Last edited on 20 March 2023, 03:15.

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这段时间怎么eh出现这么多陈年老本 我是穿越了吗（困惑

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