Reading my translations will absolve you from sins, you'll be forgiven
Julian378#2969
Original:https://e-hentai.org/g/2488089/e2e97be4da/
Chinese:https://e-hentai.org/g/2496671/135563be5d/

edit: just noticed you also offering "comissions" (nice typo) on your other galleries, also making you a scammer. Great work.

Oh yeah, don't worry. I read your "translation." You know you can admit to just machine translating everything, right? I mean, how else are you gonna pump out 250+ pages worth of content in ONE day?

Also, your typesetting needs work. Your text is often too big and completely off-center.

rough translation

Page 2
Your TL: But... // it feels so awkward sometimes...
JP: うわっ // 初めから知ってる人って気まずそう・・・
Intent: Missing the entire point of this sentence, which is 初めから知ってる人 (someone I've known from the start)

Page 3
Your TL: You know, it's funny
JP: あのおかしいな酒
Intent: Yeah, no. This means "That weird drink." and not あの = um/you know, and おかしい = it's funny

Page 6
Your TL: What's this
JP: あっまって！
Intent: Ah! Wait/Hold on!

Page 7
Your TL: Don't! If you keep sticking your dick in there...
JP: そんな乱暴におチンチンをぶち込んでくると
Intent: This is the most mild way put to it since it's omitting 乱暴 and ぶち込んでく. "If you keep pounding/fucking me so hard..."

Page 8
Your TL: Just a little more... // come on
JP: もうちょっと // いちゃ・・・
Intent: She's saying she was about to cum and needed to get fucked just a bit more. The whole "about to cum" part is absent. "But... // I was... almost there..."

Page 10
Your TL: You can't even talk anymore, such a slut
JP: あらダメよ喋っちゃ雌犬なんだから
Intent: This is so badly mistranslated it made me chuckle. "Nuh-uh-uh. Bitches don't talk. // They bark."

Page 10
Your TL: Ahn... Ahn!
JP: うぅ・・・うわん！
Intent: She's barking. "W... woof!"

Page 13
Your TL: いくら吸ってもおちち出ないよ
JP: No matter how much I suck, I can't get it out!
Intent: Wrong speaker. Noel speaking.

Page 13
Your TL: Just relax with Marin
JP: マリンほっといていいから
Intent: Just ignore Marin.

Page 13
Your TL: By the way, Noel-senpai... // With those big tits hanging out like that... // I think Marin has always wanted to suck on them like that
JP: それにしてもノエル先輩ってさ・・・//いつもあんな爆乳をぶら下がっているし//マリンじゃなくても吸いたいもんですよ？
Intent: She's saying that with her jugs always swinging around like that, Marin wouldn't be the only one who would want to suck on them.

Last edited on 21 March 2023, 01:37.

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