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[Sanatuki] Rei II Towa Saimin Manga (The Legend of Heroes: Kuro no Kiseki) [English]

[さなつき] 黎Ⅱトワ催眠漫画 (英雄伝説 黎の軌跡) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2023-03-24 04:42
Parent:2413829
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:6.66 MiB
Length:9 pages
Favorited:382 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.16

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Posted on 26 December 2022, 20:11 by:   GigantRegis    PM
Score +106
Borderline unreadable. Towa deserves better than this.
Posted on 27 December 2022, 04:30 by:   Goldey44    PM
Score +51
Wtf is this "translation" lmao
Posted on 27 December 2022, 11:10 by:   yetsun    PM
Score +79
It's a throwaway account, translations won't be fixed. The uploader account is literally called Throwaway5432, they are just dumping all the machine translated and gibberish nonsense.
Posted on 27 December 2022, 11:35 by:   Holion    PM
Score +17
why isnt it hit with rough translation tag

bet it's a indonesian translater. i got scammed by one from before.
Posted on 27 December 2022, 18:40 by:   Hurahara    PM
Score +65
@Holion
rough grammar tag requires reasons...
I get why, but it's still a pain.

Guy says he wants sex with himself instead of the teacher. Calls her a him.
Broken english, p7 isn't even fully translated, etc...
All of Throwaway5432's uploads are like this, whoever is tag-checking.
Posted on 04 March 2023, 08:34 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +49
001
OG: トワ先生のあのケツ…いつもいっも思春期の男子生徒を前にっ!!
TL: "Towa's ass is always in front of an adolescent male student!"
ED: more than one student

OG: やりてー先生とセックスしてぇ!!
TL: "Do it, do it, do it, have sex with Sensei!!"
ED: he's just saying he wants to have sex with her (no repetition)

OG: と今までなら思うだけだったわけだが
TL: "Or so I thought until now"
ED: he still thinks that way, he's just saying up until now he's ONLY kept it in his thoughts

OG: 今日は違うなにせ
TL: "Not today, after all"
ED: he's saying today's different

002
OG: 催眠内容は…
TL: "Hypnotic content..."
ED: he's entering the details of her hypnosis

OG: 俺とセックスしたくてたまらなくなる
TL: "I can't wait to have sex with me"
ED: I'd fuck me so hard he's saying she'll want to fuck him really bad

OG: 俺とセックスしたくてたまらなくなって毎日ドスケベなセッタスをしまくるようになる…と
TL: "I was so desperate to have sex with me that I ended up putting away my perverted sluts every day"
ED: he's saying she'll want to have sex with him so much that they'll have nasty sex everyday

OG: 早くこないかな~先生♪
TL: "I hope he'll be here soon"
ED: she

003
OG: ここなら人こないね♥
TL: "There's no one here"
ED: she's saying no one will pass by if they're in that specific location

OG: いつも先生でおちんちんシコってくれてたんだ?
TL: "Were you always doing with your penis, sensei?"
ED: she's asking him if he always jerks off while thinking about her

OG: は ハイ!
TL: "Yes, sir!"
ED: ma'am if you want to use that to address her
Posted on 24 March 2023, 07:05 by:   guy6359    PM
Score +8
can we like, petition to expunge this guy's galleries? they are all completely shit
Posted on 25 March 2023, 04:00 by:   GeminiJ    PM
Score +6
@guy6359
both this gallery and the other recently updated gallery by this user appear to have actual new translations that aren't MTL garbage.
Posted on 26 March 2023, 09:21 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +62
it's just been run through a different MTL and/or edited to the point of being rewritten. did you compare the lines? so many of them got worse...
and nearly all of my original corrections still stand, they're just off by one page now because there's a random cover page

002
OG: トワ先生のあのケツ…いつもいつか思春期の男子生徒を前にっ!!
TL: "Instructor Towa's ass is a problem for an adolescent male student like me!"
ED: the original mtl was closer than this one

OG: ぐぬぬ…
TL: "It's making me horny...!"
ED: this is completely made up

OG: 誘ってんのか?クソ!!ああやりてー先生とセックスしてぇ!!
TL: "Is your ass inviting me to have sex with you instructor!?"
ED: 2nd line is still missing, my original correction still stands

OG: と今までなら思うだけだったわけだが
TL: "I thought I could never have sex with instructor Towa"
ED: this line is a continuation of the previous line, my original correction still stands esp since the TL still omits the part that this line continues from

OG: 俺とセックスしたくてたまらなくなる
TL: "Have the target have sex with me"
ED: this line is more coherent but less accurate now. ironically the original mtl was closer

OG: うん?これだとちょっと弱いか?
TL: "Hmm...this app feels a little weak"
ED: he's not talking about the app

OG: 俺とセックスしたくてたまらなくなって毎日ドスケベなセックスをしまくるようになる…と
TL: "I was hoping to have Towa do my other perverted requests with this but it doesn't look possible"
ED: my original correction still stands, the boy's revising his original wording. this line is just completely rewritten at this point

OG: ここなら人こないね♥
TL: "There's no here"
ED: not only did the original mistake not get corrected, this line got even worse

OG: いつも先生でおちんちんシコってくれてたんだ?
TL: "Towa, have you played around with dicks before?"
ED: original mistake still stands, but now this line is being spoken by the wrong character

OG: は、ハイ!
TL: "Yes! I love playing with them!"
ED: wrong speaker and the dialogue is completely made up
Posted on 26 March 2023, 20:55 by:   Goldey44    PM
Score +6
Hope this "throwaway" account dude gets Permanently banned. I get that translators are picky with what they want to translate but if it isn't translated either wait or pay for it yourself.
These throwaway accounts keep saying "Will delete once a proper translation is made", yeah okay. That's so pathetic.
Posted on 27 March 2023, 06:02 by:   SyriasX    PM
Score +7
the real problem with these throwaway translations is that it likely (not speaking from direct experience but years of observation) discourages ACTUAL translations by being even passingly comprehensible to the target language.

circles that already dont get natural runs of translations will find even less of a pull because someone has already technically done it so you'd have to pay for a better translation if you arent gonna make one out of spite

the throwaway isnt gonna lose anything cus what are you gonna do? ban their IP? seems a bit too far for this shit even if it is extremely annoying and they could always get around that anyway

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