RAW:
COMIC Penguin Club 2023-02 [Digital]
https://e-hentai.org/s/d77312a312/2426414-113
COMIC Penguin Club 2023-03 [Digital]
https://e-hentai.org/s/125335b4cd/2459279-19

You used the wrong 1280x downsized resolution. Originals are at 1334 x 1920. Download the archive or the non-downsized torrent.

Also, did you know that ellipses in English are horizontal, and not vertical?

You ALSO got her name wrong. It's not Mura, but 村野 (Murano).

Here's a bunch of other things you got wrong:

every page: her name
every page: extremely poor phrasing because you're trying to copy Japanese structures and words 1:1
some grammatical errors

Page 1
Your TL: Hah
JP: はいツ！
Intent: Even without context this would be wrong, but with context this means "Got it!", i.e, she's calling that she's gonna hit the ball. Pretty common in volleyball (and baseball to catch).

Page 2
Your TL: Are you interested in volleybal // I-I am!
JP: ぼ 僕は
Intent: The way you're wording it makes it sound like he's actually interested in volleyball. He's not. He's just stuttering. "I... I'm, uh...!"

Page 2
Your TL: I see... "You're pretty cute." // Is that... what I think you're saying?
JP: そっかーキミ可愛いね // もしかして・・・そういうことかな？
Intent: Understandably confusing, but these two sentences are unrelated. She is calling HIM cute, not quoting a hypothetical thought he might have. The other sentence relates to the "secret" nature of what she does, revealed later.

Page 2
Your TL: It was so sudden, I blanked out. I'm so confussed (sic)
JP: 突然で頭真っ白になってしどろもどろにいになっちゃって・・・
Intent: No. These aren't separate sentences. "I screwed up... I suddenly drew a blank and blurted out an incoherent mess..."

Page 3
Your TL: so you'll have to put up with this
JP: これで我慢してね？
Intent: To put up with would use the literal meaning of 我慢, when in reality she's telling him "So this'll have to do", i.e, a handjob is all I can manage in the middle of my club activities.

Page 16
Your TL: I hope they enjoyed it
JP: 喜んでくれたかな？
Intent: She's not speaking about the dudes she just fucked, but our protag. They = he.

Page 17
Your TL: I want you, Senpai
JP: 独り占め
Intent: This doesn't just mean "to want someone", it means to monopolize. "I want you to be mine and mine only, senpai...!"

Page 18
Your TL: I don't care about that
JP: いいよそんなのは言わなくていい
Intent: Idk where the "I don't care" part comes from. It's more like "It's fine, I get it (so you don't have to keep trying to put your thoughts into words)."

Page 19
Your TL: Do you want me to do it? // Start with an exchange or somethbing?
JP: しないの？ // 文通とかから始める？
Intent: Not what she's saying. She's teasing him. "You don't wanna fuck? // Maybe you wanna take it from the top and we can start by exchanging [love] letters or something first?"

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Good for him that he's so optimistic, but a girl like her ain't going to stay loyal.

Base +9, BlueSmoke +9, OMJay +6

I can't be hassled to upload a separate 'redraw' page so here:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/axybn06vd9dtuub/%255BMuramasa_Mikado%255D_Senpai_of_the_volleyball_clubRedraw.zip/file

Base +5

Is that link working for anyone else?
Tried editing the link to https://www.mediafire.com/file/axybn06vd9dtuub/[Muramasa_Mikado]_Senpai_of_the_volleyball_clubRedraw.zip/file
but still getting "Something appears to be missing…"

Base +7