Better quality scan and new translation of https://e-hentai.org/g/2142467/ce2620a046/

And bonus image

Poor aoin getting butchered out here...

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This translation is better, not great but an improvement still.
And thankfully the quality is original, not over-saturated like the other versions

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The first translation is better. Here is a complete nonsense, which was not in the original. It seems that the author came up with the dialogues himself.
Even Google Translate shows the essence better.

Last edited on 28 April 2023, 01:30.

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I cracked up so hard at the Don Corneo pic, was not expecting it at all. XD

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