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[GABUGABU (GABURI)] Okaa-san, Mou Ichido Ninshin Shite. [English] [KeizerD] [Digital]

[GABUGABU (ガブリ)] お母さん、もう一度妊娠して。 [英訳] [DL版]

Doujinshi
Posted:2023-03-31 01:37
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:23.53 MiB
Length:38 pages
Favorited:1098 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.38

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Posted on 31 March 2023, 01:37 by:   KeizerD    PM
Uploader Comment
This one caught my eye; at first glance, it looked a bit dark, but it turned out sweet in the end, and I thought, "What the hell, let's do it."

Notes:

-I tried my best to translate it as closely to the original story as possible (comment if you think something isn't right and I'll correct it).

-I had to redraw some parts since JP text was covering the art and I didn't want to put ENG text over it because it didn't look clean.

-Original resolution: 648x906; new resolution: 1060x1500.

-The typesetting might be a bit off, but hopefully it's not too bad. (still learning the ropes hopefully I don't get too much heat about it, but I'm better at artsy stuff drawing, coloring etc...)

Well, I hope you guys enjoy it either way.
Posted on 31 March 2023, 01:45 by:   XKGWA9    PM
Score -24
thank u hero
Posted on 31 March 2023, 01:47 by:   KeizerD    PM
Score -77
@XKGWA9 No worries.
Posted on 31 March 2023, 02:13 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +256
only read a bit but fyi in just 5 pages:

006
OG: マジえっろ…
TL: "Seriously..."
ED: he's saying they're sexy

OG: なに、この子のこの目…私の子供…授乳で育てた子なのよ…?
TL: "My child...the child I breastfed..."
ED: missing the entire first part of the line

OG: その子が私の胸をこんな、こんちな目でっ…!
TL: "Touched my chest and looks at me with such eyes!"
ED: there's no mention of touching

007
OG: んうっおいひいよっおかあさんっ
TL: "Hey, mom..."
ED: he actually tells her something, he doesn't just say her name

OG: なにっ!?なになに!?知らないっこんな吸い方っっ!
TL: "They[sic] way my son is sucking on my nipples..."
ED: you cut out her confusion

008
OG: お願い、こんな事はもうやめて?あなたは私の可愛い息子なんだから…分かってくれるわよねっ
TL: "Please, don't do this anymore, you're my sweet son..."
ED: missing final part of line, which is directly related to next bubble

OG: お母さん…俺は本気だよお母ちんの方こそ分かってよ…
TL: "Mom...I'm serious."
ED: missing final part of line, which is directly related to prev bubble

009
OG: いッ、ぐ!?ぎいッ!?
TL: "What are you saying?!"
ED: these are grunts and moans

OG: 逃げる?息子から避ける?そんな…そ、なの母親として最低だわ…!
TL: "Run away? Run away from my son?"
ED: missing entire last part of the line

010
OG: 挿れるっよっ!
TL: "You can put it in!"
ED: wrong speaker
Posted on 31 March 2023, 02:24 by:   KeizerD    PM
Score -44
@rsx205 Thanks for the heads up, I'll fix them.
Posted on 31 March 2023, 06:31 by:   tealsack    PM
Score +84
>I tried my best to translate it as closely to the original story as possible
This means you don't know a single bit of Japanese and even if you did you are nowhere close to being at a level where you can translate. Please never translate again. How this has more than 1 star is amazing.
Posted on 31 March 2023, 08:46 by:   KeizerD    PM
Score -76
@tealsack Thank you, I appreciate your perspective.
Posted on 01 April 2023, 17:54 by:   vivendicrust    PM
Score +61
>Original resolution: 648x906; new resolution: 1060x1500.
Please never do this. I don't care how low the raw resolution is, you still adds nothing by upscaling it.
Posted on 01 April 2023, 21:43 by:   KeizerD    PM
Score -50
@vivendicrust Okay, no problem.
Posted on 02 April 2023, 10:03 by:   Demosthenes    PM
Score +72
@KeizerD
It's good to see you taking the criticism as well as you are. Now here's to hoping that you keep going and improving to become a better translator, and fix up this gallery.
Posted on 02 April 2023, 20:31 by:   KeizerD    PM
Score -37
@Demosthenes Thank you, that means a lot. I recently picked up JP translations and I'm doing my best to learn, it's not an easy task but I'll keep at it untill I improve. I usually translate spanish, french and italian with no issues wich I'm fluent in, and don't mind the criticism I learn from it, and if people hate on me it just goes over my head doesn't bother me one bit. I'm currently working on something as soon as I finish I'll fix the mistakes in this gallery.
Posted on 28 December 2023, 05:02 by:   Ziergds    PM
Score +6
Nice heartwarming little story. Kinda chuckled a bit on p14 xD.

Mothers belong to their sons.

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