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[Minor Boy] Dorei Saimin ~Sanbiki no Mesubuta~ [English] [lodhel] [Decensored]

[まいなぁぼぉい] 奴隷催眠 ~三匹の牝豚~ [英訳] [無修正] [DL版]

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Posted:2023-03-31 21:16
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Posted on 31 March 2023, 21:16 by:   lodhel    PM
Uploader Comment
Finally, this tank is done!
This one was out in the wild since 2020, I can't believe this gem hadn't been translated yet, so I took it.
I really like minor boy's style his drawings are amazing, I only wish there were more chapters or at least he developed things a little faster to show more stuff, like showing them making those adult videos or more of the countryside jobs (especially at an onsen/hot spring).
Anyway, this one is for all you guys who contribute in someway to this community, I hope everyone enjoyed it as much I enjoyed translating.
And please support the artist, buy his book!

Buy on: https://book.dmm.co.jp/product/526618/dmmmg_0619/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1710089/4c81be48ec/

*If someone wants to help proofreading it (fixing TL/grammar/typos) or redrawing, we could do a v2 of these chapters. (pm me on forum), I'm not redrawing anything, i don't have the skills or patience for this. About the moans/screams, I mostly leave them as romanji (or very close), it's surprising hard to translate them without a good eng knowledge.

Update 2023-03-19:
- Added chapters 03-05 (I had some rare free time this weekend =D)

Update 2023-03-25:
- Added chapters 06-08 (those 2 pages at the beginning of ch6 was hell to TL -_-)

Update 2023-03-31:
- Added the remaining chapters (09-11)
- I did a review on all chapters looking for basic typos/grammar errors and redid some lines
Posted on 17 March 2023, 22:43 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +94
rough grammar

p.4 Tonight, as you can see the headline on the data screen... // The Eurocentral bank board decision last month > This is nonsense. The first sentence doesn't flow into the second. Also, shouldn't it be "European Central Bank"? But then they start talking about Japanese monetary policy, so I'm gonna assume you mistranslated something.
p.5 For the next segment / I got the commentary from the usual economic critic > Again, doesn't make sense. "For our next segment, // Moriyama-san, our economic analyst, will share his analysis/thoughts/commentary, as usual."
p.5 caster > news anchor.
p.6 That mini-skirt she don't mind wearing them, either > This section just doesn't fit the rest of the sentence. I don't even know what you're trying to convey here. "She doesn't mind wearing a mini-skirt either." maybe? As its own sentence?
p.6 studied economics in UK > the UK
p.7 the viewership increase > increases
p.8 did you knew > know
p.9 making videos of a teenage girls > of teenage girls
p.9 swimsuit suits > cut suits
p.10 embarassed
p.11 then the younger sister changed of production company > changed production companies
p.12 wharever

This is just a sample. There's a lot more than that.

Other comments: why are you not redrawing? You're also missing some punctuation.

If you want help with translating older stuff, check out EHCOVE: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=174429
Last edited on 18 March 2023, 20:39.
Posted on 18 March 2023, 05:41 by:   BlackOrion    PM
Score +71
Thanks for taking the time and doing it, even with the rough grammar. The fact that you do it with no reward is something people should have some consideration of.

I hope you get trough the whole thing; personally I don't give two quarters of a shit about punctuation and other crap, at least it's not machine translated, and again you did it for free. There are plenty of people that might want to give you a hand if you want, but regardless I just hope you stick to it if you can. Again, thank you.
Last edited on 20 March 2023, 02:28.
Posted on 18 March 2023, 09:42 by:   Argonisgema    PM
Score +34
I applaud your work and hope the whole thing gets don't.
Posted on 25 March 2023, 22:33 by:   newtype711    PM
Score +113
Thanks for the effort.

However, if somebody puts out something sub-par they can, will, and should be called out on it.

We are of the belief that the best version possible should be the one that is released. Thinking that something is "good enough" will in time lead to a stream of garbage, it has happened
many times before. "I tried very hard." does not excuse releasing something sub-par especially when there are many resources, and people on this very site to help you out.
Posted on 01 April 2023, 03:01 by:   Bang-99    PM
Score -4
Thanks for sharing.

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