UPDATE: Fixed the levels and the dust!

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Commissioner: Syborg
Translator: EL JEFE
Editor: Horned_Mori
Typesetter: Kirameow

Beyond the fact that this is already licensed by FAKKU yada yada, leaving your files in RGB and not leveling them is a major pet-peeve.

Here's a quick comparison: https://ibb.co/QFvGFwk

You'll notice your images have this weird, ugly brown tint to them - that's because you're in RGB and not greyscale. Leaving your files in RGB also massively bloats your file size. You're just shy of 100MB for 24 pages of pretty damn low resolution.

You'll also notice your images have faded colors - that's because you didn't level them (especially the blacks). Adjustment layer > levels

Finally, your cleaning is pretty bad. There's dust (remnants of uncleaned Japanese text) in basically every bubble. Kinda would expect better out of "paid commissions".

(Oh, and periods also exist.)

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Well this group started as me just translating by myself and hiring an experienced editor to do everything else. Now, I'm actually having a team train up to be a permanent part of the operation.
Sadly, there are some growing pains associated with that but we make sure the client is satisfied first and foremost.
That said, I'll be taking the advice to heart, let's see how everything looks looks once we put these things into practice.

Also, I may be misinformed but it is my understanding that in comic translation, you don't have to close out dialogue bubbles with periods except when used for emphasis as the cuts between bubbles serves the same grammatical function of a period. It's a minor thing and an easy fix in the worst case scenario, anyways.

Thanks for your attention!

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Yeah, periods are not necessary on comics bubbles. A period is an indicative of the end of a sentence, so if the bubble doesn't contain multiple sentences, the bubble in itself is the indicative of the end of the sentence.

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TOMBOYS IN CUTE FRILLY DRESSES OOOOOOOOOOOOH

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So sweet.
Though I really wanted the last page to be the mean girl and her cronies getting tossed into a fountain or something.

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@EL-JEFE
Sweet, thanks for fixing. See below on explanation on punctuation. In short: punctuation rules are the same as in other English medium.

@masterandi
You're completely wrong. Periods are necessary in comics. Not using punctuation is a Japanese manga tradition. It doesn't apply to Western languages, which includes translations.

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Is this a translation error? WHy would the girls refer to her as "big bro"? Wouldn't refer to her as Anego? I.E big sis?

@cutegyaru
>which includes translations.
Hahaha since when?I see tons of translators that don't use punctuation. Whether this is proper English or not doesn't make your comment correct. You can't say that it includes translations if you include "traditions". If you want to talk about proper punctuation, then it would be wrong in Japanese manga too when not used. But there you mention "tradition".

You know what also is wrong? sound effects. They don't have proper punctuation... yet they are still written like that in comics.

Remind me of a funny story. A couple of years ago, some English words were imported into our dictionary. Everyone wrote it the way it is written in English, but then when our government decided to import the words, they changed the spelling.

What I am saying here is that you can't just go around changing words simply based on what is. It also has to be applied to the medium and what it is used for. In the case of comics a good reason not to always use it ise because it can clutter up the page and make it harder to read. Granted, at times you need punctuation etc, but at other times it just doens't make any sense.

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@Ilyia
Yes, they call her "big bro" literally, as in "aniki"! They're kinda teasing her about her strength and boyish demeanor. Like when you have a very skinny friend and you nickname them "fatty".

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