This time I tried to be more careful with grammar, and again, I translated the Spanish translation made by @LeisureScan

Leisure Scan: twitter.com/leisurescan

Spanish version: https://tmohentai.com/contents/635efdf33fd9b

Chinese version: https://*****.net/g/414762/

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Fucking gold

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Thanks for the translations, love this artist's works.

Base +26, dankestdungeon -24, icesonic +8

p.17 it came out a lot - you came a lot

Page 5
Your TL: Whenever I think of the hero
JP: 弄ると
Intent: Not whenever, but specifically when she 弄ると

Page 11
Your TL: Ok
JP: 大丈夫だよ・・・
Intent: She's not agreeing, but reassuring

Page 12
Your TL: You're sucking
JP: 吸い込んで
Intent: Ironically, there's a difference between sucking up and sucking

Page 17
Your TL: After all, this isn't enough
JP: やっぱり足りなかったよ・・・
Intent: Seems to be more a result of poor English, but the "after all" makes it sound like she's justifying a previous statement when it's a continuation of what she says earlier in the doujin. "Yeah, this is [still] not [nearly] enough..."

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where is chapter 4?

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this is what you called a learning progress.. keep it up

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Digital Decensored shot: https://e-hentai.org/g/2710900/eff6a4f5aa/

Shot 6: https://e-hentai.org/g/2518903/580063da34/ you are here

Decensored Shot 5: https://e-hentai.org/g/2710899/1ed990ac40/

Decensored Shot 4: https://e-hentai.org/g/2602289/164b6b9129/

Shot 3: https://e-hentai.org/g/1976356/71d91c18d9/

Shot 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/1893871/af4755369c/

Shot 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/1811744/f6a9e4707a/

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