RAW：https://e-hentai.org/s/54127c3310/2365108-81

As the name implies, this translation is in any way, shape, or form, perfect. English is not my native language & I have close to zero knowledge in the Japanese language, & Photoshop. I typed every single alphabet (hiragana & katakana) inside an online Japanese keyboard (lexilogos.com) and Googled the meaning for the words. As for the kanjis, I used an online kanji handwriting recognition website (kanji.silfaq.org), draw the kanji there and search for the meaning through Google. In some instances where I can't wrap my head around the context of the sentence, then I'll plug it into DeepL. Most of the time it came back as nonsense, so I tried my best to put 2 and 2 together and just roughly guess the meaning.

If you have any suggestion on what I can improve for the translation, feel free to leave it in the comments, I'll revise the gallery ASAP.

I'm doing just doing this so I can beat my meat to it & maybe others who can't read Japanese, can beat their meat too.

Whoever meets the requirement to add the "rough translation" & "rough grammar" tags, please do so.

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>If you have any suggestion on what I can improve for the translation, feel free to leave it in the comments

Learn japanese. Like, for real. It's a fun language and you'll make yourself and other people happy that you did justice to the artist's work.

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If you don't know english and japanese, what make you think you're qualified to translate anything at all ? Dumbfuck.

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I'm not mad this is a poor translation. I'm mad this is a poor translation that you people rated FOUR STARS. Come on guys, have some standards.

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I'm trying to think of where the lady is from. She looks familiar, but can't place it. (andou hiroyuki loves basing their characters off of other fictional characters)

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@zxczxcasdasd

>Learn japanese. Like, for real. It's a fun language and you'll make yourself and other people happy that you did justice to the artist's work.

Yeah, I've been trying to while doing this "translation" & between my free time. I have no intention to make other's or the artist upset with this. I was under the impression that there are those, like me, who just wanted to roughly understand the story when jerking off.

@wootwoot123

>If you don't know english and japanese, what make you think you're qualified to translate anything at all ? Dumbfuck.

Fair enough.

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come on dude, even AI can check your grammar now and you can ask a native English speaker to proofread it. There is no excuse to be mediocre and say it's okay

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@Darkei

>come on dude, even AI can check your grammar now and you can ask a native English speaker to proofread it. There is no excuse to be mediocre and say it's okay

Never said it's okay. I know it's shit and never pretend like it's more than that. Would you mind suggesting any community where I can find native speaker to proofread the translation?

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Some folks are quite harsh. A little too much. But, it's best not to share poorly translated works, as they're less likely to be picked up by translators (or that's the common argument). If you want advice or tips, look at comments made in other 'poor translation' releases on here. Many translators, and readers (e.g. CuteGyaru) have some fantastic advice on how to edit, translate, etc.

My advice: Practice, practice, practice. BUT, don't release it here, until you're genuinely proud of the release, test waters by sharing and communicating with others in small circles.

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