This was supposed to a be quick In-N-Out™ job.
But then I noticed the transparent text bubbles are being covered up completely.
Then I noticed the script doesn't line up with what I remembered on the original Japanese. Oh, well.

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I've opened an editing bounty for Shiki Takuto's rewritten Chapter 2 of TS Revolution tankoubon version, feel free to snatch it or support it if you like to see the whole tank to come out at less than glacial pace. Thank you!
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=24103
Else, if you want to help proofreading the script (it's in Mega.nz folder inside the bounty), I'd really appreciate that as well!

I came for the degenerate cheating and ntr, but it was an interesting story. Both of them are pretty equal with being bad and unfaithful. The ntr, really wasn't notable and she was acting of her own volition. Just two flawed people who don't seem evil, and are working to get by, but finding themselves compromising on their ethics again and again for the passion. The only thing I really don't get, is why it had to be his kid. That's the one detail of this story that felt nonsensical.

Thanks for the upload

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She wanted his kid cuz she loved him. Tbh a better story if she wasnt married. I understand him not being able to break up with his girl because it would cause a scandle and possible damage his future but she gets reduced to a whore.

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lmao, the mental gymnastics these two people go through to justifying cheating while refusing to marry each other.

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Both MC are too toxic. The guy is just your ordinary fuckboy without any intention of commitment or being honest. The girl definitely could have been able to move forward and find someone worthy of her instead of that jackass who got her pregnant, but society.

This is Japan after all and when you are a +30 female you have to settle and marry or else, you're becoming a cast out of society.

TL;DR: Japan was a mistake.

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Interesting, the other translation implies that the male and female mc both want to continue their relationship while here the female mc basically blackmail the guy to continue their relationship.

Which one is more accurate?

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@Dr.Pavel
Per page 2 and my uploader's description; the previous release (that predates rough TL tag) rewrote a lot of stuffs from the original script that I went to the trouble of spending dozens or so more hours translating & editing various bits from 40+ pages, when I could get away with just porting them all to uncensored official TW version.

I'm assuming that you don't know Japanese or Chinese enough as a comparison, but you don't have to take my word for it. Put the pages you feel dodgy enough to your favorite MTL, and see if it came back with anything resembling mine or previous one. One is a rewrite that often not having any trace of the original sentence.

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Great work, thanks so much.

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¡Jezz!, the guy thoughts are complete trash. Him don't even matter anything except sex.

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That's a lot of effort to not get married to each other. It's like... double the effort for people that don't want trouble.

Last edited on 26 July 2023, 17:09.

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they guy is right though. he doesnt have to settle at all. why? because he can get every girl he wants. his prime is yet to begin. the girl is in her 30s. the ship, which granted you endless options like when you were 20 long sailed.

theres a reason such girls in that age are called "leftovers". because they were busy fkin around in their prime or going for their "business"(who the fk cares; as a guy nobody does), then become mad and toxic as they see their time running out. too bad even those women, which have nothing reasonable to offer still wants a high value guy. crazy...

this doujin is more than accurate regarding her and her mother.

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Why is this tagged "Uncensored" when this is CLEARLY censored? What a LIE!

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