This is my first time doin' a comic of this scale. I feel like I've grown a lot from the process comparing the early pages to the final ones. I hope you like it!

Ah this was wonderful! Super cute and sweet

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This comic is awesome, wholesome, kinky, and GENUINELY FUN!

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minor nitpick, it appears that the dialog is handwritten or uses a handwritten style font. it would be easier on the eyes if the dialog were in a regular font most comics used. but it's a minor thing, the art and story are good.

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Awesome work!

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Yeah I did all the text hand written. I've been unsure about it the entire way through but i couldn't find a type font I liked and have never been great at type setting nor how to make it not look super sterile. If anyone has good recommendations for a visual pleasing and non clinical font I'd greatly appreciate it!

@Neeckin, @MitchellTF @netserfer
Thank ya's so much for the kind words! was a bit anxious postin' this. One of the few times I've posted something outside my own little bubble lol.

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Really enjoyable, like the characters, art, imp shortstacks.Looking forward to what you do next :3

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@Little_b0t You could make your own font, that way it still has some personality. This video has some good tips. https://youtu.be/yG5Wwq8FfrQ in the first few minutes it explains how to use a website called calligraphy to make a font of your own.

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In the olden days, the speech bubbles of quality comics were supposed to be hand-written. Producing neat letters was another skill required from comic artists. So hand-writing is by no means wrong, but even then, you’ll need to come up with letter designs that are easier to read and please the eye. Then practise, practise, practise. Using a regular font could be easier.

"I feel like I've grown a lot from the process comparing the early pages to the final ones." – I think you’re right. However, the milk bar sex scene feels like some regression, probably because there is so much going on in so little space. Also, as more and more imps join in, it gets harder and harder to keep track of who’s who. This could be less of a problem if your pacing was a bit slower (e.g. giving more panels to the reactions of the couple on a date) and if you did not fill up the pages with so much skin.

Criticism aside, I see great potential here if only you can stay motivated and have enough time to produce more. The reason I’m here in the first place is that I instantly fell in love with your forum avatar; I’m hoping to see a gallery of your individual illustrations, sketches, and the like.

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@NinjaMangle:
Thanks for the suggestion and link, I may actually look into that it sounds super fun!

@Katajanmarja
Yeah the last few pages got a little bit scrunched, I actually had to do computer repairs around that time and it sort of threw off my original schedule. I was also running on about 5 months working on this comic give or take so wanted to get to some sort of conclusion for now. There is supposed to be a chapter 3 I'm planning to begin around July. I wish I had given some things more time to breath towards the end, but funny enough some of the criticism at the time when I was making it was that my pacing was far too slow.

As for the text font I'll probably try typed text for atleast a little while, it may speed up my process a bit hopefully!

Speaking of illustrations and sketch dump galleries I was thinking of doing that cause I do have A LOT but haven't come to a conclusion of how I should order or post them at the moment. Not really even sure when or where to start.

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"some of the criticism at the time when I was making it was that my pacing was far too slow" – Correct me if I’m wrong: This type of feedback typically comes from readers who wish to see more action. They are used to porn writing being so sloppy anyway that sacrificing more than a few pages to the setting and to character development is a waste. I kind of understand their view, it’s just that I go for non-comic galleries if I feel I’m okay with characters that have no background.

It’s impossible to please everyone, so whenever in doubt, follow your own calling! :)

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I was wondering where this was posted, now I don't have to dig into twitter

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