thanks for picking this up

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I only read the first half or so but fyi

002
OG: このまま仕事なくても実家の世話になるかもしれんし
TL: "I mean, if I don't get a job I guess I can stay home and take care of my family"
ED: even without JP knowledge this TL doesn't make sense

004
OG: ヒマそーな店だな…
TL: "This place has been here forever"
ED: he isn't talking about its age

OG: し…しかもあんなの相手にか バカな
TL: "I...with someone like that"
ED: unTLed portion is part of his reaction

OG: いた…っ / マズイ…！
TL: N/A

OG: やっぱり夢じゃないのか
TL: "I thought it was a dream"
ED: he's realizing that it was not a dream

005
OG: いいなりになんか．．．
TL: "You little..."
ED: he's conceding to the point that the voice made

OG: またこんな所でやったら
TL: "If I ever get my hands on you"
ED: he's talking about the location

OG: さすがに言い逃れできない
TL: "I won't let you get away"
ED: he's talking about himself getting out of a bad situation (directly related to next panel)

007
OG: は…？ / ちょ… / 何！？
TL: N/A

OG: 知らねーよ出てけよ！
TL: "Hell if I know, get out!"
ED: she isn't saying that she doesn't know

008
OG: 冗談じゃないなんでそんなこと…
TL: "Stop joking around..."
ED: second half untranslated

OG: どーも
TL: N/A

009
OG: 不純異性交遊にエロ動画に窃盗って…
TL: "Stealing erotic videos..."
ED: he lists three separate things but you/your MTL just combined two of them (directly related to final bubble)

Last edited on 17 April 2023, 03:54.

Base +32, WildCrow +13, Jeshua +6, BFBK +6

Prolly won't be posting anymore so actual TLs will be more likely to pick it up. Also I can't expunge these galleries until a newer, better version comes along, so guess we're stuck with my crappy translations for a while.

There is a line in Chapter 3 that I'm curious about. He's rubbing a woman's pussy and says
OG: まだろくに触ってないのに。 このトロマンはなんですか
Toroman doesn't have a translation anywhere, so I assume it's slang for Toro (fatty cut of tuna) + Manko, which is both appealing and unappealing at the same time lmao. Do you agree with that slang translation?

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it's onomatopoeia, not tuna. the speaker is talking about how wet she is even though he hasn't really touched her pussy

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>Also I can't expunge these galleries until a newer, better version comes along, so guess we're stuck with my crappy translations for a while.
That's not how it works. You can't expunge these galleries just because you think they're crappy.

Base +22, Chuula -6

Yeah... that makes sense. Didn't consider that angle. Well I translated it to "juicy pussy" in the end, so it's not entirely off the mark, I guess. <_>

And isn't that what I said? :pensive:

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