https://okita-ababa.booth.pm/items/3561344

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group: SachiKing https://discord.gg/8CJEf4r megafagget@cock.li
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This author is just always one step away from making something perfect.

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geez, what was even all that set up for? the way the story was going made me think there'd be some twist or something.

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to be continued?

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Geez, was hoping the delinquent would at least escape the trope…

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The cover drawing is just exessively good compared to the rest. And unecessary NTR stuff also

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A good set up wasted by mediocre NTR.

@pihip Sure, whatever. I just mean this is mediocre on its own merits

Last edited on 27 April 2023, 17:20.

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@MARTIANxMADNESS

NTR wastes everything, and it's very frustrating when good artists are involved as they could use their skills for much better work.

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this artist just love not drawing sex scene its hilarious

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idk but this is geh lmao

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Nice story, didn't even have to cum to enjoy it thoroughly. "Glad your transition is going well!"

Base +6, FertyJukli +10, Coledas Ukgent +12, Kues -6, FacuDaReplix -6, a faggot -6, Akdav -3, Undeadcynic97 +9

This had potential

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Hate to give visually-adequate stuff a .5 rating, but when you take an interesting concept, make it seem like you'll avoid the usual pitfalls by OUTRIGHT FUCKING IMPLYING THAT IT WON'T HAPPEN IN THE CUNTING TITLE, and then piss all that goodwill away with not just a NTR ending, but a fucking WEAKASS, limp-dicked NTR ending, then yeah, I now personally hate this artist and hope that he will eternally step on Legos whenever he is barefoot

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Looking at these comments, I guess NTR don't mix well with the TS crowd?

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@9321j It's more that NTR is a godawful fetish that poisons anything that it touches. I'd rank it down with guro, scat, and beastiality

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This is barely even fucking ntr lmao

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He just had to make it that at the end Daigen beats up Manita for manipulating and abusing Ryuko (BECAUSE THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE STORY THEY SHOW US HE IS STRONGER THAN MANITA!?!?!?!) And then they get together, so simple, so obvious, yet he didn't do it...

Base +7