【NTR】

>>第一話<<
>>第二話<<
>>第三話<<

**作者預定六話完結**

如有錯誤,歡迎指正
喜歡且經濟有餘力的看倌,不妨支持下作者
https://book.dmm.co.jp/product/4234526/s246asnph01051

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女主的媚態還是挺傳神的,挺讓人興奮的..

說畫得好...女主的心情上轉變又很不細膩..像第三話傳艷照感覺很突兀..這話就完全沒有感到作用..
可能作者自己有篇幅限制考量吧(預定是六話完結)

但說不好,這話黃毛釜底抽薪一下動搖女主的作為我覺得畫的又挺妙的

"那妳嫁我不就好了"充滿惡意又讓人忍不住
女主自己也知道別人根本沒有跟她交往的意思,這不能當真,但...甚至在做的過程也發現,別人喜歡的是"有男友的自己"

這一話很有種那種吸食毒品常用到的一個詞 "
Bad Trip" 在吸食過程產生一種恐懼&厭惡&噁心的心理
明知道吸得過程(sex)可能讓人不適,甚至藥效過去後同樣讓人不適
還是忍不住想碰觸...
(這邊指得是一些國家地區當地合法的毒品)

感覺這作品如果再拉長點1.5-2倍...更加細膩刻劃一下女主內心轉變...
可能畫長了太拖沓也不好看...但個人還是喜歡細膩的刻畫
或許作者這樣六話,讓讀者自己想想其中環節還是更有樂趣吧

请问这个是已经完结了吗

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啥情况啊，老的白e和彩e，里站咋都sad panda了，有人也是这样吗

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里站用不了，只能用表站，怎么回事啊，兄弟们救一下

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退出登录，重新登录一下就好了

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So what's the premise this time? Please and thank you.

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Ah, so Ryuusuke finally found out. It'd be nice if Megi didn't go for the cliche cuck ending next chapter.

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Thank you for the upload!

@vjbeal96
This is based off of Papago translation, please anyone correct me if I'm wrong.

Beginning her work friends are saying she's dating Kato(douche), she says she's not and ignores him at work. Kato sees Ryosuke and thinks he's looking thin and it's all my fault. Kato tells Ryo that he hasn't gone drinking with them in awhile and they should he has something to tell him(Fing Dick). Ryosuke says if I have time. Coworker implies Kato and Ryo have a bad relation ship and weren't they best friends since high school? Then Kato remembers catching Ryo kissing the girl he likes in High School, but I'm not sure he actually told Ryo he liked her(I think it was something like, everything is good). Whore meets Kato at her apartment and tells him she's getting married so they can't have sex anymore. Kato says marry me instead, Whore gets flustered and doesn't say no way. Then Kato says I'm better then your boyfriend and they fuck. During it Kato tells her not to worry about Boyfriend and to just enjoy it(I think). She gets into it. Ryo gets the wedding ring earlier and brings it to Whore's apartment to surprise her and catches them fucking.

I really think this is going to go way to long. Next chapter should be Ryo walking in punching Kato and ripping the ring off the Whore's finger. THE END. It won't. I'm sure he's just going to walk away, maybe leave something so she'll realize he was there, or something. The one thing I have to say is I'm thinking we won't get Ryo getting off on getting Cucked, but I am worried he'll just accept it and stay with her like nothing happened. That would be some bullshit. Maybe this is Kato's revenge for high school, but that was High School, and you weren't engaged to her. I also like how he hasn't told Whore that he's friends with Ryo and Ryo surely knows they've fucked. So being a dick to her too. Pretty great.

Personally I think it would be hilarious if he walks out and takes their shoes with him.

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This shit mustbe doing bad in sales if the author is giving the chapter 1 away for free to lure in new readers. He knows what he must do but author is a coward and has been taking all the cliches from the book on his work. If he chooses this then he'll end up dropping it with a half assed ending like Uyuu's Papakatsu Himitsu because sales bombed lol.

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So i checked autor twitter and found than this series will have 6 chapters, also i think the last imagine is a spoiler for the next location

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Thanks @Drew21 - Thank you!! Can you drop the twitter link? I could not find it.

If that last image is a spoiler, I'm going with Ryo takes her on a Onsen trip in an attempt to make sure she's his. Decent chance it's their honeymoon. Kato shows up and fucks her again, probably in front of Ryo and this breaks him or he catches them and just leaves. I think smaller chance she goes on it with Kato. Either way it's probably one volume to many and I'm definitely guessing Ryo's letting it ride....sigh.....

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@johnsmy if you mean author twitter, is @yumeatu or if you mean the link where I found the one of the 6 chapters, I found it in a commentary but I don't know which one xD

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这剧情大纲很迷惑，总觉得10话都出不到，女主没啥灵魂

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@johnsmy

Thanks for that. So this is essentially a petty party for some girl who he liked way back when? Gotta say that's a long time to hold a grudge for a girl who didn't even recognize you let alone seemed to care. I can only see this ending 1 of 2 ways. We'll see how this turns out.

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这黄毛能处，每次都只射外面不中出

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这个剧情不错，女主很骚。

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剧情放以前还能说不错，但在现在这个时代多少已经有点“一望到底”的感觉了。
或者说经过这几年的洗礼，这种感觉最后无非就是在“A原谅她然而她还是继续荡”或者“B黄毛和女主幸福在一起苦主悲惨度过下半生”这种结局
区别在于角色塑造上顺滑不顺滑，只不过目前来看，漫画上限还是得看俩爷们，女主本质上是从心学派宗师，谁能维持她这种继续爽的状态她就跟谁保持关系，男友是谁并不重要

至于现在插入这段黄毛往事，是想让黄毛最后给苦主来一句“复仇者集结”，还是啥就不得而知了
从男主这边的情况来说，似乎好像只有被爆杀这条路能选，以此前我看的那些其他反杀牛头人的漫画里，大多数男主都有自己的一技之长
而这个男主相对于黄毛的优势本质上其实不是他自身的优势，而是刚好应了女主的刚需，所以这个优势并不在于他自身
从而形成了男主进退两难，女主哪怕被曝光了也就找其他接盘的然后继续出轨爽的这种大致发展路线，虽然想个反杀结局不难，但如果接下来只有两话的话，那估计还是走保守的A路线或者B路线

而就如此前所说，女主其实也压根不是啥重要因素，本质上脏了之后，她最后归不归男主，男主都属于输的透彻的一方
核心方面还是看接下来两话能不能让黄毛有个好理由爆杀男主，或者男主有什么重量级手段给黄毛来一次“不可磨灭的体验”
所以才说这漫画上限全看这俩大老爷们┑(￣Д ￣)┍

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最好結局就是男主找到第二春，女主苦苦哀求男主回到她身邊但還是被拋棄只能跟黃毛，結果黃先又跑出去睡其他人，最爽結局

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这啥？开放式结局？很难接受

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黄毛这段往事插入得莫名其妙，就像是临时想的……给亲友ntr女主找个解释，但这都第四话了。第一话黄毛不知道是朋友女朋友，第二话是知道了有些惊讶，总的来说大体还像个亲友，然后隔了两话就突然我其实和你有点仇，不过也可以解释成黄毛有愧在给自己的行为找补。

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