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[Sumiyao] Nakadashi MP Kaifukuman Tanetsuke Dungeon Hen Chapter 1

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Posted:2023-05-12 10:59
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Language:English  TR
File Size:110.2 MiB
Length:156 pages
Favorited:221 times
Rating:
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Average: 1.66

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Posted on 12 May 2023, 10:59
Uploader Comment
This is Machine Translation, some words are misspelled,wrong pronounced or even broken, if anyone wanna fixed it, it'll be helpfull.

All credits goes to the artist Sumiyao
https://www.pixiv.net/users/7246
Posted on 12 May 2023, 12:45 by:   gigasgmx    PM
Score +59
Mad props to you for putting the fact that this is machine translated on the gallery cover.

Here's some suggested grammar fixes (not translation fixes! I don't speak a lick of japanese!) from a native english speaker:
Based on the manga's name, "Labyrinth" should probably be "Dungeon" in almost all instances. Labyrinth would be more correct in a vacuum, but dungeon is the accepted terminology in the adventure fantasy genre that this is clearly operating in.
pg 7: "I felt an illusion that there was a huge hole at my feet, and I felt fear" is definitely wrong.
pg 9: "Ymir, you followed me when I decided to become an adventurer --an old friend of mine" --> "Ymir--an old friend of mine--followed me when I decided to become an adventurer."
pg 10: "This area has always been unexplored by monsters." --> "This area has always been unexplored because of monsters."

More later--my ADHD won't let me make any more progress right now.
Posted on 12 May 2023, 13:11 by:   Rou123    PM
Score +10
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Posted on 12 May 2023, 16:04 by:   spierdalacz    PM
Score +147
Kill MTLs. Behead MTLs. Roundhouse kick a MTL into the concrete. Slam dunk a MTL baby into the trashcan. Crucify filthy MTLs. Defecate in a MTLs food. Launch MTLs into the sun. Stir fry MTLs in a wok. Toss MTLs into active volcanoes. Urinate into a MTLs gas tank. Judo throw MTLs into a wood chipper. Twist MTLs heads off. Report MTLs to the IRS. Karate chop MTLs in half. Curb stomp pregnant MTLs. Trap MTLs in quicksand. Crush MTLs in the trash compactor. Liquefy MTLs in a vat of acid. Eat MTLs. Dissect MTLs. Exterminate MTLs in the gas chamber. Stomp MTL skulls with steel toed boots. Cremate MTLs in the oven. Lobotomize MTLs. Mandatory abortions for MTLs. Grind MTL fetuses in the garbage disposal. Drown MTLs in fried chicken grease. Vaporize MTLs with a ray gun. Kick old MTLs down the stairs. Feed MTLs to alligators. Slice MTLs with a katana.
Posted on 12 May 2023, 19:35 by:   preaplanes    PM
Score +41
The grammar is one thing, but HOLY SHIT the perspective swaps more often than a D.I.D. faker on Tiktok.

Is this the girl's perspective? The guy's? Third person omniscient? Who knows! It changes EVERY SPEECH BUBBLE, with no clear coloration difference to clue you in!
Posted on 12 May 2023, 22:40 by:   AresEmen    PM
Score +39
@preaplanes

There is in fact coloration on the text in the speech bubbles in JP, no clue why they didn't add it to the MTL, lol.
Posted on 13 May 2023, 08:46 by:   Boshi    PM
Score +58
The worst part of MTL is that not only is this unreadable but now an actual translator will be discouraged from working on this because there's already a "translation"
Posted on 14 May 2023, 18:41 by:   junk123455    PM
Score +66
I agree with spierdalacz except for one thing. Don't eat MTLs, they're not designed for human consumption.
Posted on 25 May 2023, 17:10 by:   FudgeSickle    PM
Score +79
Hey everyone, I'm doing my own translation of this title with proper grammar and word coloring. Please be patient, as this is a very large and lengthy project.

@Boshi Thankfully I started this some time ago so I'm almost done with the first chapter. I plan on doing the rest of the series as well, so please don't machine TL the rest of it as well.

13/02/2023 - There was a bit of a delay since I lost access to my image editing software for a month, but this project is indeed ongoing. Thank you for your patience.
Last edited on 13 February 2024, 08:56.
Posted on 04 July 2023, 05:40 by:   Gall Anonim    PM
Score +8
@spierdalacz
You can't lobotomize it... that does require a brain.

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